Souls (Daniel/Charlotte, One-Shot)

[hey_a_newday]

Title: Souls
Characters/Pairings: Daniel/Charlotte
Rating: PG
Notes: Slightly AU towards the end.  Lost isn't mine, these 2 characters (sadly) don't belong to me! This is my first fic, so please be gentle. However constructive criticism isn't bad.
Summary: My silence solidifies, until that hollow void erases you, erases you so I can't feel at all

Comments

[sausage_lunatic]

She couldn't lose her.
^ was that supposed to be "he"?

Yeah, I read it even though I don't know LOST. I liked it.

Some criticism: keep your tenses straight. Like sometimes it would be present tense and other times it would be past or future...it's not that big a deal, but it'll make things a bit clearer. =}

[hey_a_newday]

Possibly, shit! I'll fix that I guess!

Thanks for reading! I'll make sure to do that!

[sausage_lunatic]

No problem! I bet it would make a lot more sense if I actually watched the show. =D

[roseys_fics]

Umm, hey, I just found this fic through the Charladay master list. I know it's almost a year old, but hey, nothing wrong with appreciating older fic! I really like this, it reminds of the good charladay times before it all got so angsty. :)

[hey_a_newday]

Thanks so much!!!
I love reading the old Charladay too, I miss it :(