Feedback - Aoi/?, Aoi/everybody - 1/1

Jan 26, 2010 20:25

Title: Feedback
Rating: PG16
Chapters: 1/1
Pairing: Aoi/?, Aoi/everybody, Uruha/Reita/Kai
Warnings: nasty things in toilet pots
Symmary: Aoi decides to write a little something on the toilet wall.
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Basically, Aoi really feels like his rectum will explode open in horrible ways of painful and unimaginable embarrassment if he can’t sit his bare butt on a warm toilet seat right this second.

Aoi’s hurrying down the hallway to his goal door - well, scurrying as fast as his clenched asscheeks let him. He roughly pushes the door handle down, forgetting all what his mother (and Ruki) ever taught him about germs and germs and his pants are unzipped even before he reaches the first cubicle.

He’s so desperate he has no time to even lock the door, he just flips the toilet lid open and -

“Aw, shit.”

Aoi is right, it is shit. Literally, because there is a big huge dark brown piece of shit bathing in the clear water of the toilet bowl. Aoi takes one depressed look of that disgusting thing and decides he has more dignity than to relieve himself in the company of Mr. Hankey from an anonymous creator. Aoi makes his last effort and gathers his pants from around his ankles and hobbles to the next cubicle, the short trip nearly doubling his agony.

A man just wants to take a dump, dammit.

And when he does, it feels so good Aoi has to hold on to the toilet paper holder and squeeze his eyes shut. The toilet pot plays merry tunes as it sprays water in a perfectly angled line to wash his ass.

Aoi only remembers the pen when he hears something clatter to the floor. The felt tip pen he stole from Kai after Kai had finished copying their schedule to fifteen different papers (eleven for himself, four for the rest of the band) because Aoi thought the pen smelled good when uncapped.

Aoi only remembers what you are supposed to do with pens in toilets when he is washing his hands after recalling everything his mother (and Ruki) ever taught him about germs and germs and the pen is uncapped even before he reaches the second cubicle again.

Aoi stares at the vast space of white cubicle wall in front of him. He knows he has to be dead on and clever and original and witty about this and write something like GOD IS BLACK or WHY DID THE CHICKEN CROSS THE ROAD? and he takes a good minute deciding what to write because he wants to be unique and clever too.

Hi. Aoi writes.

Then he caps the pen and balances it on top of the toilet paper holder. He uses his elbow to push open the toilet door because he still recalls everything his mother (and Ruki) ever taught him about germs and germs.

Aoi actually forgets about the toilet wall and his pen balanced on the toilet paper holder until two days later when he needs the assistance of the singing toilet pot again. He tries cubicle number one.

“Why the fuck?” Aoi asks the toilet pot sadly, after peeking under the lid. Looks like Mr. Hankey is still swimming there.

Aoi takes his business to the second cubicle and he stops in the middle of pulling down his pants.

Hey. How you doin’? someone has replied.

Someone replied!!

Aoi stares at the writing the whole time he gets rid of his body waste. There is something burning in his stomach, and he is starting to realize it isn’t from the relief of using the bathroom for once.

It’s excitement. This is serious. And Aoi knows he sometimes makes pretty embarrassing mistakes when he is excited, but now there is no room for mistakes. He has to play his cards right.

Aoi contemplates on his reply, resting his chin on his fist, rolling the pen between his fingers and letting the toilet pot wash his ass crack three times. Finally he decides on an answer and also - a little white lie wouldn’t hurt in this situation either.

I’m 21, sexy, desperately need to get laid.

“Hehe, I get straight to the point!” Aoi smirks. Then he caps the pen and balances it on top of the toilet paper holder. He uses his elbow to push open the toilet door because he still remembers everything his mother (and Ruki) ever taught him about germs and germs.

There is some kind of giddy anticipation in the pit of his stomach as he casually walks to the second cubicle the next day.

I just discovered I’m not wearing any underwear today. Hmm. someone has written above Aoi’s original greeting message but Aoi pays no attention to that because he got a reply too!

Do you mind older men? it says.

Aoi only wastes time on smelling the tip of the pen before he writes on the wall and doesn’t even miss a heartbeat.

I love all kinds of men.

Aoi has no idea how many people frequent the bathroom on the third floor, and how many of them actually happen to use cubicle number two nor how fast he could get a reply, but he notices that he is drinking one bottle of soda after the other, just so he’d have a real excuse to walk down the hallway too. A day later there is something new to read again.

desperate much? someone random has added to Aoi’s and Mr. Older Guy’s conversation, but Aoi got a reply again too.

Do you want to get dirty with papa, little boy?

Aoi lets out a low whistle. “Is it hot in here or is it just me?” he asks the toilet pot. This is serious. Aoi can’t ruin everything now and kill the mood, he has to be dead on and clever and sexy and suave. After a minute, he writes his answer.

I’m a bad boy! Spank me, spank me!

Aoi grins to his reflection when he is washing his hands. He is quite brilliant, he finds. He walks out of the bathroom, already wishing for the next day.

It’s actually an hour later Reita finds his way to the bathroom. And as someone is occupying the first cubicle, Reita tries his luck with the second. It’s unoccupied.

“What the -” Reita finds himself asking when he sees the wall. He thinks the things written there are pretty embarrassing. But he has something to say too. He prints his message to the wall in huge thick letters.

REITA ROCKS!!

Some time later, Reita interrupts Uruha’s intense Game Boy battle by sitting down next to him and telling about the cubicle wall. It is old news to Uruha already, because Uruha loves bathrooms and he knows the state of every single toilet pot in the building, but he still laughs with Reita over the desperate guy wanting to get spanked. Uruha loves Reita’s laugh.

He doesn’t particularly need to use the bathroom, but he stops by cubicle number two before heading home. He locks the door and uncaps the pen.

I jerked off here once… he confesses to the wall.

And then he draws a nice fat heart behind Reita’s name. Uruha caps the pen and balances it on top of the toilet paper holder. He doesn’t even think about washing hands and freely uses his hand to push open the toilet door because apparently nobody ever told him about germs and germs or he just doesn’t care.

Ruki hears about the cubicle from Reita too. Ruki has been using the ladies’ bathroom across the hallway this far, because as far as he is concerned, there are germs and germs, and then there are germs and germs and men’s public bathrooms certainly has the latter.

Ruki has the hardest time of the day maneuvering inside the cubicle without letting his skin come to actual contact with anything. But when he sees the vast space of mostly still white cubicle wall in front of him, he knows he has hit jackpot.

Ruki does write Suck my dick! under the spanking request, but he doesn’t particularly care about anything else there because he spends the next twenty minutes drawing.

Ruki’s drawing a huge penis. It’s erect and veiny and impressive. Ruki adds a bit more dark manly hair on the scrotum and then he’s done.

RUKI’S COCK he writes under the drawing.

Oh hell yes. Ruki’s smirk is a little more devious that day, because Ruki knows he says (and draws) only the truth and nothing but the truth.

Kai is actually aware it’s his pen people are using to ruin PSC’s property but he can’t bring himself to confiscate it. He can’t stop himself from checking the wall for new messages every morning either. He can’t believe he gives in to temptation so easily as he uncaps the pen.

-me too he scribbles under the masturbation confession.

Kai too, Kai too, Kai has jerked off in a public bathroom and now he is letting the world know it. Kai is a dirty man. He hangs his head in shame. Kai is ready to unlock the door and leave for good, but he hesitates suddenly.

Taking a big shaky breath, he grabs the pen again, and quickly draws and fills out another heart in front of Reita’s name.

Then he flees the scene.

Five minutes after Kai leaves the room, manager sneaks in. He sneaks his way straight to the second cubicle. He needs to check if that sexy 21-year-old has answered him with anything yet.

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