Comments | heygotcha: wrong

16littleseconds in heygotcha

wrong

Sep 30, 2010 19:28

wrong
eleven/amy, doctor who.
1,204 words, pg-13.
summary: amy's lost and scared and the doctor knows that it's wrong, but he can't stop himself.

( Wrong, wrong, wrong, the word echoes in his mind, but his body doesn’t respond. )

pairing: eleven/amy, rating: pg-13, language: english, fandom: doctor who

Comments 13

peonyinblue October 9 2010, 01:04:21 UTC

I really like this story - just the right amount of bittersweet. And I like the way you twist around what is "wrong" for each part. Really thoughtful and beautiful!

16littleseconds October 9 2010, 11:24:16 UTC

Thanks a lot for your lovely comment!
At first I didn't have the idea to work with the word "wrong" in each part, it just came to my mind while I was writing, and I thought that it could be nice! And bittersweet fics are my favourite :D

wuhdemah October 11 2010, 05:01:24 UTC

I really enjoyed this-- the different but similar takes on wrong, the images, the... everything! Great work. <3