Comments | heyincoherent: How [1/1]

heyincoherent

How [1/1]

Feb 13, 2010 00:59

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awesome chouhana February 13 2010, 09:56:17 UTC

I loved this story so much because it is actually the closests fic to reality that I have ever read. *claps. Like I mean fantasy is good ... Great even but this fic was a nice deep breath of fresh air and I cannot wait to read more of your work! xD

Re: awesome heyincoherent February 13 2010, 22:39:04 UTC

*O* Thank you! I hope I can fulfill you expectations. I will attempt to feed the community wish my type of writing!

Re: awesome chouhana February 17 2010, 23:34:22 UTC

YaY! ^.^

flashbacku February 13 2010, 10:08:39 UTC

I loved it so much, it seems so ... real ~ like it could really have happened (and which is what I'm kind of wishing rn XD)
Thank you for sharing ♥

Oh, and Key confessing = pure love.

heyincoherent February 13 2010, 22:41:00 UTC

Key seems to be the one that confesses first. I cannot see him being shy about it. Thank you! Though, I don't really believe that Key would go looking for Jongkey. Maybe it was the side bars on you tube saying "Related videos" XD

Things could happen~

restless_28 February 13 2010, 16:52:23 UTC

i'll add this to my memories.. evreyone are right..much close to reality .. i like how the two wondered why ..they are ...them ..haha.. Thanks for sharing..~

heyincoherent February 13 2010, 22:42:01 UTC

Uwah m(_ _)m Thank you! I feel so flattered, is that suppose to happen? Yes, I am sure they wonder at some point. I mean, they live together.

siaht February 13 2010, 17:36:32 UTC

I'll go with the others and say this is excellent, but it would be a little unfair if I said it's only because it feels so realistic. It's excellent also because of the way you write.

And omg I LOVE how the internet plays a part here. This "Funny how it is the third party that catches all the little things." is just so true. I mean, of course this third party would be us fangirls who hunt JongKey moments everywhere AND find them for the most part. If they saw all that, they would have to reevaluate how they act around each other, at the very least. Reevaluate their feelings. Like, "is this only fanservice that we do?" or "Does this means something for me? What about him ( ... )

heyincoherent February 13 2010, 22:44:59 UTC

Wow, such an awesomely long comment. I love you xD Thank you! I can sorta see SHINee searching the internet and talking about things like evidence. Can't you?

Yes, Key is just stating the obvious! I mean, he kinda acts like it and just... well it's just there. Until he marries a girl I will believe what I believe in.

Jonghyun loves attention. lalala~ More as soon as my brain gets an idea :3

salted_taiyaki February 14 2010, 04:03:22 UTC

! Well! I liked this a lot. It was great how you incorporated the fans [cough us] and the Internet and all of the other details that drive *us* to believe that they're real [for the most part] with Kibum's own feelings and realization and

darh this was too cute. I loved the forehead kiss part. It was simple, it was simply nice. Thanks for sharing! hope to see more 8)

heyincoherent February 14 2010, 05:46:40 UTC

I probably had some fan image as I wrote the forehead kiss part. XD I hope you will read my future stuff too! Just as soon as some inspiration hits me. Realism at my best abilities.