Comments | heyitshaii: #023: Tears: [FIC] Tears on a Satin Pillow

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#023: Tears: [FIC] Tears on a Satin Pillow

Aug 21, 2009 15:47

Title: Tears on a Satin Pillow
Author: heyitshaii
Pairing: Yesung/Shiwon
Theme: # 023: Tears
Genre: Angsty (happy ending)
Rating: NC-15 (I think)
Fic: 2/100
Disclaimer: I don’t own any human being. Including the members. The story is of my creation so don’t compare the details to reality.
A/N: Comments are love!! and this is Un-Betad, there are probably ( Read more... )

100 suju fic challenge, yesung/shiwon, yesung, shiwon

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heyitshaii August 22 2009, 00:15:52 UTC

I know lol, I'm use to fluffy things so I HAD to add that in there!

ahmilli August 21 2009, 22:11:56 UTC

The introduction was really funny! I totally didn't expect a R fic. I was like, OMG there's sex? LOL.
Anyway, I haven't read bottom!Yesung in a long time. Thank you for this. :)

lacrymamosa August 21 2009, 23:56:05 UTC

this is LaCrymaMosa...

lacrymamosa August 22 2009, 00:04:20 UTC

oh yeah don't pay attention to the above comment. It was just a trial as I was trying to post cm as an Anonymous (I had to log out to read ur story bc I am not old enough to read this - as you rated). So I had to introduce myself first, but somehow the comment was posted succesfully.

So yeah, I am LaCrymaMosa =]

I avoided reading Angst!YeWon, esp the Tears theme. I just can't stand seeing them break off. But this is such a nice and lovely one based on the common theme. The ending is pure love. My heart cringed as Yesung cried, and fluttered when he was hugged and confessed to that he wasIS lloved.

But I do hope you will remove the age filter D:, there is smut in this but I don't quite think it is smth hardcore D: I hate having to log out. Then posting cm as an Anonymous. Then proving I'm a member of lj by retyping username and password :\

Write more YeWon please xD

heyitshaii August 22 2009, 00:28:42 UTC

yay thanks!!

lol sorry about the age thing... I'll change it...

and about your "this is LaCrymaMosa" comment. It was pretty creepy and it freaked me out lol. I was just about to reply to it saying something along the lines of WTH? or something.

sandx August 22 2009, 01:39:50 UTC

amazing!!!! i didn't want to read this at first because i read th angsty part but then i saw the happy ending and i HAD to read it!!! this was totally AWSOME!!!!

lulufeca August 22 2009, 03:08:22 UTC

cute ending ^^
but so sad... yesung crying...

dont drink anymore yesung! be drunk is not good