[FIC] Some Enchanted Evening

[hf_pocus]

Title: Some Enchanted Evening [Blood Ties]
Author: hf_pocus
Paiaring:Henry/Mike
Rating: 18 and up
Warning: M/M sexual content.
Disclaimer: I don’t own them, make no claim to or make a profit. Done for fun.

He flopped himself belly down onto the bed, tucking his arms underneath the pillow and pushing his cheek into the crumpled softness. The muscles in

Comments

[ravenboo]

NICE !!!! :D

[hf_pocus]

Thank you glad you liked it. :)

[ravenboo]

Welcome, thanks for sharing :D

[belovedbywar]

Oh yea!
VERY nice!
Loved the massage(made me jealous *g*)and the sex scene was passionate and tasteful.
Only one thing (since you wrote very detailed); I can't imagine Mike could take it dry and unprepared. (You did not mention that at all, which is why I at first thought it to be a dream.)
More? Maybe why Henry comes to visit and why Mike lets him do this?

[hf_pocus]

You know it did start as a dream and I did have some anal licking (tease, tease) and lubing going on but I thought(and after letting a friend read it who thought it was too wordy -shrug-) a bit much and gave Mike a chance to see who it was.I did question myself on that point quite a bit though but cut it for sake of momentum. This time I opted for hot and heavy and all ready ready.:D Next time I'll leave in all those details knowing now that some like what others feel is unnecessary.

Thank you for reading and I am glad you liked it. :)

[wil_low]

Nicely done. Very sensually written. If only all massages were that good!! TY for writing it. :)

[hf_pocus]

Thank you darling. I appreciate it. :D

[hf_pocus]

Thank you, I appreciate it. :) You know I am still thinking on a threesome thing. Could very well happen. :D

[sherron]

Nice "little blip"! Glad you had it and shared it. I'm such a voyeur.

If Beloved can be picky about lube (I too noticed the omission, but agree that it would have broken both the mood and the momentum. After all, it IS fantasy, and no one ever mentions condoms.) may I be picky about the verbs "to lie" and "to lay"? Mostly, humans "lie, lay, have lain" and chickens "lay, laid, have laid" eggs. Almost everyone does these two wrong, and yes, I'm quite the Nazi to even mention it, but since everything else is so perfect in your story, I decided to be really picky. So in the story, it's "as his body lay there upon," "as he lay on the bed," and "silent order to lie still." Of course, what happened to Mike was Henry laid him, but not like an egg! ;)

[hf_pocus]

Guess I don't get in A. Should have paid attention in English class way back when. -laughs-

Thank you for reading and commenting.

[sherron]

Oh no, you get a A! Maybe just not the A+.

There's probably only three or four of us in the whole world that would notice, and I'm the only one Nazi enough to say anything.