L'Chaim Chapter One

[melanyebaggins]

Okay, here's the 'beginning' of this experimantal fanfic of mine :D I hope we all learn from it as Peter and Sophie are (and the kids). I'm trying to write it so that as the characters learn things, the reader does also...let me know if I slip up at all, or if you don't understand something okay? (this is an experiment after all...) And as always,

Comments

[perfectlylexy]

OMG...*dies laughing* I love it! You have managed get the interactions between the students down perfectly....and god, I was laughing...Can't wait to see the next part!

[melanyebaggins]

Thanks! *happy* I was giggling whilst writing :D

[dreamtocreate]

I apologize for taking so long to read and comment on this. And oh my God, it was just... wo. I'm waiting with bated breath for the next part! *g*

[melanyebaggins]

*giggles* Aww, shucks! *blushing* Thanks so much! The next chapter is well underway...it'll be a bit longer too, as I'm being silly, and taking a while to get to the plot (those kids are far too much fun to play with ;) )

[dreamtocreate]

*cheers you on*