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L'Chaim Chapter Two

Jan 05, 2006 14:45

I'm FINALLY finished this damnable bloody long chapter ;) I hope you like it...I am a little nervous about the end...I don't mean to offend anyone (and by anyone, I mean my Orthodox/Jewish friends). I hope I haven't taken...it...too far. My goal is to show how low he is to start with, so we can measure progress later. *please don't kill me ( Read more... )

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perfectlylexy January 8 2006, 02:50:24 UTC

Oh gawd...I was almost in tears with Chaim at the end of this...even though he brought it on himself. Excellent work! I can't wait to see the next one!

melanyebaggins January 8 2006, 06:53:51 UTC

Thank you both SO MUCH! I was really nervous posting this one, as I didn't want to present a...bad picture of Orthodox Jews (especially to those not familliar with it, as I assume you arent...) Thanks again...you made me happy :) (and I love your story, by the way, you two are awsome!)

dreamtocreate January 8 2006, 02:58:09 UTC

You, my dear, are a phenomenal writer. I bow to you and cheer for more! More, please... * begs *

And I love that whole Scott and bacon incident... * snickers *

melanyebaggins January 8 2006, 06:52:22 UTC

I thought you would *winks at icon* It was my little nod to that wonderful movie :D (There are a few other nods in here too...I'll give you a cookie if you find them...)

dreamtocreate January 8 2006, 21:50:26 UTC

* meeps * I thought of one last night, and now forgot... * goes to reread happily *