"Angels With Two Faces", Chapter Three

[katmillia]

Title: Angels With Two Faces
Chapter: 3/??
Fandom: Arashi
Character, Pairing(s): none
Rating: R
Warnings: Violence and language
Summary: "I'm Kazu Ninomiya. I'm 26 years old, and I'm here to catch a murderer. Let me tell you about Los Angeles."

Comments

What's wrong with being naked?

[silentchord]

I'm adoring all of the cameos - be they officers, victims, suspects etc You've managed to flesh the plot out brilliantly with them ♥ Though, are you trying to rip my heart out with killing Mabo and Yoko off? XD

Re: What's wrong with being naked?

[katmillia]

LOL I LOVE THE TITLE OF THIS COMMENT.

Yes, yes, ripping your heart out was indeed the name of the game. ;) Although which was worse- having them be dead or having them be dead-beat suspects? xD

Thank you so much! The cameos are fun~~ <3 <3

[desirer91]

This chapter was simply great

[katmillia]

LOL it's a change from OMFG RUN!!! ZOMBIES to this very slow and drawn out homicide investigation which is at some times AGONIZINGLY slow. It's actually really throwing us off; we're struggling far more than we did with the last one on getting this one going as well as it should be. ;) I guess this is what happens when you skip around genres like this.

Jun and Nino's pasts are interesting things. Not life-changing interesting, but propelling them both down their own life lines, as it were. :) Always something like that, right? And the tension between them is always so palpable since Nino's rank gets in the way- especially since he pulls it so often!

Thank you sooooo much!! <3 <3 We are so happy that you are reading and enjoying, we always wonder if we will be losing people when we change genres so drastically from fic to fic! <3 We ADORE your feedback so much!

[desirer91]

Unless you're gonna start writing Mpreg (!!) or males becoming females then I'll keep on following what you write

[katmillia]

LOL we joke that we should write mpreg and then we can't even continue down that line because it makes us sob incoherently in a corner for like ten minutes. Whyyyy, fic authors, whyyyyy?? D: So no worries, you will never see mpreg from us. Unless it's done entirely in jest to be hilariously funny or something. Or to mock the entire idea of "mpreg". xD

[barefootprint]

you know what? i take back what i said last chapter. YOU ARE WORKING AS SECRET AGENTS. lol. again i love the detail of it all. i especially liked the part how you compared the musical terms with the murders. makes it more easier to understand.

this is getting more and more interesting. another murder but still no lead whatsoever on their suspects. 3 dead before their eyes and it's eating them all up.

like jun, i wonder why nino even chose to be an agent. there's something behind his reason of not playing the piano anymore.

i'm loving this! i think i've said that a million times already in previous comments but seriously i do. thanks! i'll be waiting for the next one! =3

PS: at the first part of the chapter, nishikido was spelled as nishikado. it's a small small detail that i just want to point out. feel free to ignore :))

[katmillia]

LOL yeah you are correct on spellling- 18 hours of sleep in 5 days, and that was so far the only error. Jamie corrected me this morning- SORRY I WAS REALLY EFFING TIRED lol lol thank you~~~~

Aaaahhhh we .... well, we might be secret agents. ;) ;) You'll never know! *evil cackling* Perhaps this all really happened and we are just changing the story to fit into Arashi~ xD

Thaaaaaaank you so much for being awesome! We are so happy that it's coming across well and still ending up as exciting as it could be. Murder investigations = not really like they seem in movies, hahaha. There's a lot of down time we are working around! :) <3 <3 !!

[harin91]

I'm in a rush and I can't comment properly, but just one thing: the piano scene was AMAZING.
And the entire story is so well written... I'm really addicted (again).
Love you girls, I can't wait for the next chapter!

[katmillia]

<3 <3 Thank you soooo much for commenting at all when you are rushed and running around! We are so happy that you even did that for us. :) :) *sniffle* We love you, too!

[hwlinyitw]

This one was great! Well, I could probably say that about every of your chapters but the part with Nino playing the piano was wonderful I hope to know more about Nino and everyone, how does they get there. And though the plot is really interesting itself I can se (maybe hope?) that they probably will develop some bond, right?? I love when they interact, each and every of them bringing the case their points of view.
Your writing style is awesome I am always amazed by it.
Ps. Was it deliberated that this was posted yesterday (15 in Japan)? 'ya know for their anniversary? Or coincidence?
Ps2. LOVE this bit:
killer was smart. Killer was good.
Nino was better.
I was like, with a smug smile in my face, yeah Nino is better. xDD
Have a wonderful weekend! ^^

[katmillia]

LOL it was a coincidence that it was posted today, actually, because of real-life things keeping me busy from posting all weekend. But SURE we will pretend it was intentional! xD

Thank you so much! We are so glad you are enjoying this! There may be bonds eventually, you will have to see how it develops~~ oh ho ho <3

I hope you have a wonderful weekend as well. :)