"Angels With Two Faces", Chapter Four

[katmillia]

Title: Angels With Two Faces
Chapter: 4/??
Fandom: Arashi
Character, Pairing(s): none
Rating: R
Warnings: Violence and language
Summary: "I'm Kazu Ninomiya. I'm 26 years old, and I'm here to catch a murderer. Let me tell you about Los Angeles."

Comments

[r_1_ss_a]

jun + golf = LOL!

i am so loving the jun and nino chemistry. finishing each other's sentences... :)

and aiba. he is so adorable. poor overworked sho. and dr. ohno!

you two always have the gift to make us all fall in love with your characters.

i can't wait to see how the funeral goes...

thanks for another awesome chapter! <3

[katmillia]

You are very welcome! We are mostly glad that the characters are coming across so well. This is giving us the chance to meta a lot- namely Jun hitting the camera during vs Arashi. ;) Poor Jun and his complete inability to golf!

Thank you sooooo much for reading and supporting us! <3 <3

[foxymulder42]

Dear U.S. Ambassador to Sho Sakurai's Pants and Fabby Fabulous King of Fabulosity MatsuFabmoto Jun,

I am officially hooked now with this chapter. I feel like you are bringing the story together only to have it unravel in some awesome twists and turns I know you gals will put on it all later. I don't know if that made sense but it's coming from me and sense I tend not to make.

I <3 your writing! But what's with the lack of comments? I guess people really like to have the ship in order before they begin reading LOLZ.

Feel like you put in all the "awwwwww, Aiba!!!" moments for me. If not, I will choose to believe that anyhow.

Much love,
Co-owner of Aiba Masaki's birthmark

[katmillia]

Dear Co-owner of Aiba Masaki's birthmark,

We are very glad you are now hooked with this chapter. It does appear that our lack of pairings so far has had a significant impact on the number of people reading. We choose to believe it's just because people are so overcome by the awesome that they cannot type anything coherent in response.

Of course all awww moments were put in for you. You are the light in our lives.

Love forever,
Fabby Fabulous King of Fabulosity MatsuFabmoto Jun

[darkilk]

Had to leave a message to apologize for not commenting on the last part. Been down with wrist injury, so trying to stay off the comp (can you believe that?!). Nino being the miser he is still I see... very consistent character trait you ladies are keeping up. :) Matsumiya! And just had to LOL at Aiba's golfing attire / entrance and Jun's misadventures on the course. Natsukashii! Just couldn't believe how I could have missed those hints as your lead-in to Matsumiya skinship. LOL...

Poor Sho... the pressure's building and even if there's no Sakumoto here, I love that there's a solid relationship among the two and Aiba that resonates well to build my empathy towards their characters.

Seriously got to keep the post short so I don't chance inflaming my wrist again. Much love gals and looking forward to the next part! :)

[katmillia]

Holy crap stay off your wrist! You crazy person, you don't have to leave us comments when you are a second away from death- okay, injured, but same thing, really. xD We are very honored that you even wrote anything out at all given all that! <3

Thank youuuuuu! We are glad you are enjoying the hints of Matsumiya. <3 They are a fun pair to write- all banter and passion and who knows what else might get thrown in here. xD You rock our socks off! Keep healthy~~

[darkilk]

typing one-handed when really have to work on comp, but that's like SO fast... won't push myself too hard, thanks for concern.

just had to leave u gals comments of some sort so u know i haven't abandoned your writing (as if i could even if i wanted to?) you gals just tempt me right back w ur awesome nuances and layered plotting that makes for a totally amazing read! Okie, promised myself to keep it short. Always in my thoughts u two *crazy* gals! :) :)

[chelshock]

i'm loving the slow build in nino and jun's relationship. jun bringing nino coffee, nino being hyper-aware of jun after he got beaned with the golf ball - both lovely little bits to the story. they both strike me as somewhat prickly personalities in general, so leave it to nino and jun to bond over an injury. XD

the nod to jaguar yokota was fabulous. i love how many je-connected celebrities you two have managed to squeeze in!

[katmillia]

LOL oh good someone picked up the Jaguar Yokota bit, I was kind of impressed with that one ;)

Nino and Jun take awhile to get together, honestly, what is with that? lol Nino is kind of hyper-aware all the time, but not usually of his partner- until he starts sort of realizing that he IS hyper-aware of it, and then it's like a vicious cycle hahaha <3

Thank youuuuuu we are so glad you are enjoying it! the cameos are fun! (and confusing) But mostly fun!

[skyhorse8]

Phew, finally caught up with the story! School really sucks. :-(

Jun's golfing episode reminds me of my own suckage during a school trip. And it wasn't even proper golf; it was mini golf. XD I love how Jun and Nino are starting to respect/understand each other - I always thought that their personalities matched on so many levels, so I was excited to see what you ladies made of it. Finishing each other's sentences is a bit creepy though. XD I can imagine Jun's horror face at that.

Poor poor Sho - but I do like reading about this angstier side of him. And adorable Aiba trying to prove his worth! I love how random Ohno is in this story - popping in and out of it quietly. That's the image I have of him in real life. XD

Oh noes - The mystery is building with three bodies! Hmmm...the burglary case still looks suspicious to me, but then again, I am not so good with guessing. Looking forward to the staking-out-at-the-funeral part - it'll definitely be interesting.

[katmillia]

Oh no! I am sorry that school sucks, haha, I understand that completely :)

Golfing- either you like it or you hate it, there seems to be very little middle ground. I think Jun is definitely on the hate it side of things. xD Too bad his swing is so bad, right?

Nino and Jun- an interesting combo. Add the rest of them in, and it's an interesting LAPD station. xD

Thank youuuu for reading and being so awesome! We are glad you are enjoying it! <3 <3 We love your feedback. <3