"Angels With Two Faces", Chapter Ten

Oct 29, 2009 15:39

Title: Angels With Two Faces
Chapter: 10/10
Fandom: Arashi
Character, Pairing(s): Nino/Jun
Rating: Hard R
Warnings: Violence, language, and a little bit of sexy times.
Summary: "I'm Kazu Ninomiya. I'm 26 years old, and I'm here to catch a murderer. Let me tell you about Los Angeles."

Angels With Two Faces [10] )

[pairing]ninomiya kazunari/matsumoto jun, [fic] angels with two faces

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darkilk October 29 2009, 21:07:47 UTC
Ah!!!! It's out! What a fantastic thing to wake up to! Got to go, but had to just leave a comment to squee!

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katmillia October 29 2009, 21:09:44 UTC
<3 <3 <3

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darkilk November 14 2009, 10:29:48 UTC
It's disgusting how much time passed before I finally managed to find the chance to post a proper comment to the conclusion.

Read it in one on the day of first post on my iTouch, but this sh***y thing called life totally took over!

A.NY.WAY. As much as it hurt to see our normally angelic Aiba get totally turned into a psychopath, I totally loved how his motivation, though *obvious* was painful to associate what we have come to know of this perpetually happy character. Kudos to you ladies! :)

The tension in the rescue of Sho had me tense that my jaw was utterly aching by the time Neens nearly lost it on Aiba. Ladies... the angst... I have no words.

Should have expected that the hard-headedness of Neens to make the ending anything but simple. Well, the boy does have lots of guilt and self-admonition to work through, and of course, his dedication to his work - so in sync with the real Neens.

Am so looking fwd to your next collab, whatever it is, whenever it is.

*silly alien running off to post on "The Lost" *promo poster*.

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reversemirror October 29 2009, 21:18:21 UTC
You guys are amazing. O_O Aiba Just...Aiba! His motivation is so disturbing but wow. And the train scene simply marvelous. They aren't in a movie and it makes sense that he leaves and feels empty. And Jun coming to get him later. Yes.

And while we would love him to play a villain, we think he is the sweetest marshmallow in rainbowland. <3
I think it's kinda good to see another side to him. :D And I agree that he is the sweetest marshmallow in rainbowland. That sparkles. :DD

So much love for you!!♥♥♥

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katmillia October 29 2009, 21:24:20 UTC
Aiba's motivation- deranged. lol It was fun trying to get ourselves in his head during the writing of this fic, just to figure out what he would do next. It was harder than we thought to get that crazed mindset, but I am glad it came across alright! :)

Hahaha Aiba Masaki- you're a marshmallow. <3

Thank you so much! We are so happy that you enjoyed it, because we had fun writing it! eeee thank you for your wonderful feedback~~~ you make us smile! xD

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kireiyakusoku October 29 2009, 21:22:37 UTC
I hafta say first that I read chapters 1-9 last night and they were one of the best things in the world.
And this chapter to finish it off, amazing.
I would have commented sooner, but I stayed up too late reading XD

Thank you so much for all the hard work you put into this wonderful story. It was amazingly well written and thought out and one of my favorite. I love Jun and Nino's relationship and the way you place and characterized each member.

Amazing, amazing job, thank you <3

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katmillia October 29 2009, 21:34:48 UTC
Hahaha I can't believe that people read these things in one go- they are like 60k words! O______o But oh my god thank you so much for staying up late just to do something like that! We are so honored.

Thank you sooo much for your kind words! We are happy that the characterization shone through well; in AU, that seems to be the most important part to keep them as who they are and not OCs with their names. :) :)

<3 <3 so much love to you!

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kireiyakusoku October 29 2009, 21:40:32 UTC
Yess I did XD; I couldn't help it! It was too addicting, like that amazing book that you can't put down~

It was really great, and I commend you on it. Congrats on finishing and thank you once again~

(I'm bad at not replying to comments ><;)

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harin91 October 29 2009, 21:32:02 UTC
Oh, God... IT'S LATE AT NIGHT! xD Tomorrow I have school! xD
But I needed to read this and solve the case with Nino and Jun *-*
And it was like you said, Aiba wanted to kill Jun after all ç__ç Aiba character was terrifying, seriously... I had to imagine an Aiba mad and the description was so real I was near tears... *sniff*
And in the end the Matsumiya... LOVE <3

Ok, I'm seriously freaking out, I need some sleep or tomorrow I'll sleep in class xD
As always THANK YOU GIRLS! This was awesome too!
I'm still completely in love with you <3
Goodnight!

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katmillia October 29 2009, 21:41:15 UTC
Well at least it's not scary to read late at night? xD We are so glad that you read this and left us such awesome comments! Thank you so much for staying up just for this~ it makes us feel so lucky to have such amazing people like you reading our fic.

Oh, Aiba! <3 Hahaha we are sorry that you were near tears~~ we didn't want to make you cry! :)

Thank you soooo much for being so fantastic! It means the world to us, seriously, you have no idea. <3 <3

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saku062 October 29 2009, 21:36:19 UTC
Aaaah...that's alreay the end T_T
I knew it was Aiba and all but...fuck it still hurts XD We know you love Aiba Masaki and he's indeed the 'sweetest marshmallow in rainbowland' but it hurts XD You're evil, you know? For writing this awesome story and achieve to give Aiba the villain role!
Thank you very much for this great story and all the great moments I spend reading it! Hopefully, reading you again soon♥

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katmillia October 29 2009, 21:43:15 UTC
Hahaha it was the chapter when you could no longer deny that Aiba was behind it all~ xD But we love him so much!

We are so happy that you liked it! Seriously, we are so happy that you were reading~~ we love getting your feedback so much! <3 <3

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