"The Lower Decks", Chapter Two

Jan 13, 2010 15:45

Title: The Lower Decks
Chapter: 2/??
Fandom: Arashi
Character, Pairing(s): Nagase/the ladies
Rating: R
Warnings: Language, sexual humor
Summary: There's jobs in unfortunate places, jobs with unfortunate people, and jobs that are just plain unfortunate: then there is the Floating Sakura, which seems to be all of the above.

The Lower Decks [2] )

[fic] the lower decks

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tsutsumi January 13 2010, 23:38:38 UTC
Oh God, this is too good to be true. =D

I´m just loving it. <3
I never knew I´d love your fail!Sho as much as I do. When I think of your Sho, it´s always the "The Lost"-Sho. Well.
I just love how they interact, especially with Nagase. Who´s really a pain in the ass, though he´s damn funny while being a pain in the ass.
I´m guessing, who the main pairing is going to be, hope, I´m right. =D

Oh yeah, and there is Taichi! <3 Thanks a lot!

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katmillia January 13 2010, 23:41:46 UTC
Hahaha there IS quite a difference between "the Lost" universe Sho and this Sho, isn't there? But we are very glad that you are having a good time reading this fic, since it's very different from what we usually do! Hopefully it remains fun (and funny!) as it continues onward~~ ♥ Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

(as for the main pairing, I guess you'll have to wait and see ;P)

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tsutsumi January 13 2010, 23:51:45 UTC
I guess, it was time for the funny fic you "promised" before your wrote "Angels".

(I know, I know. But in this case, waiting is soo much fun! =D)

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clipsie January 14 2010, 00:07:25 UTC
Poor awkward Sho. Ah, what would a story be without him.

This chapter was quite hillarious, so a big round of applause for you guys! So enjoyable, and now Sadie is known, so I'm not going "who the hell is Sadie?" anymore, which is nice. *nods*

Also, after listening to the soundtrack I give you a big thumbs up. Modest Mouse <3

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katmillia January 14 2010, 00:13:07 UTC
Hahaha oh we are glad you enjoyed the soundtrack~~ honestly, this one is fun just to jam to, let alone actually write this to. It's such an upbeat, peppy little track of songs. ;) And we are happy that it's coming across as funny, since that was the original intent. ;) Sometimes our jokes are a little on the inside, eh?

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! ♥ The Sadie mystery has been solved...

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clipsie January 14 2010, 00:17:44 UTC
I like that. The Sadie mystery has been solved... I think I'm just glad to have something to put a name too.

Oh, I forgot, somehow I didn't clue in at all about who Koki was during the pirate moment until a few days later. *sigh*

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hwlinyitw January 14 2010, 01:29:34 UTC
I can't believe that I missed the previous chapter I'm such a bad stalker xDD, no but seriously this is really hilarious I loved the "I'm a slut-mouse!" from Sho. And how Ohno listened to all of Sho's babbling about their relationship and his crush for Jun and was as impassive as ever I love that guy seriously.
And I also loved the first chapter though I didn't commented in that one It kind of felt useless since there was this one already posted I love the apparition of HSJ as the bodyguards that were smaller than whom they were protecting. And Nagase totally rocks here xDD

Can't wait for the next chapter~!

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katmillia January 14 2010, 01:58:19 UTC
Ahahaha bad stalker indeed ~___^ (just kidding! We are happy you are here reading even if you miss a chapter, we are just pleased you took the time to leave us a comment on this one!) Thanks muchly for enjoying this chapter and thinking it's funny; we think it's pretty hilarious ourselves, but sometimes our sense of humor is very skewed and not applicable to everyone, haha. :) :)

♥ Thank you so much!

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pebblegosling January 14 2010, 02:14:39 UTC
XD XD Crack! Yama pair!
Drunkeness!
I love this chapter- It was hilarious!
You guys are awesome! Can't wait for more =D

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katmillia January 14 2010, 02:18:12 UTC
Ahahaha, yes, the past Ohno/Sho is all we can work up for that pairing at this point (but we are trying!). Either way, it's pretty funny, we like to think. :) Thank you so much for reading, we are glad you are enjoying it! ♥

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rinalin January 14 2010, 04:07:22 UTC
Crescentroll.

LMAO.

Nagase is stealing the show and I love it. How ADORABLE is Sho bemoaning his love of Jun to his ex? And Ohno just nodding along all sweet and quiet. You guys are SO AWESOME!

...did I mention I'm going on a cruise in a week and a half? This fic is SO putting me in the right mindset...(minus the pirate part.)

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katmillia January 14 2010, 04:12:30 UTC
WATCH OUT FOR PIRATES!! :Db

Hahaha we are glad that you are enjoying it- Nagase really IS stealing the show, which is the best part, because he's pretty much awesome here and promises the best hilarity. But we hope to keep the rest of it funny as well, with or without his help. :) ♥ Thank you so much for reading and commenting! We loooove you~~ :)

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