"Inevitable Fate", chapter five

[katmillia]

Title: Inevitable Fate
Chapter: 5/??
Fandom: KAT-TUN
Character, Pairing(s): Kame/OFC, Kame/Jin
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Language, sexual content
Summary: We are the ones who will break the wall of fate. Kamenashi's life is the same as it always has been, until the day his transmitter shorts out and his entire existence is irrevocably altered,

Comments

[threewalls]

OMG. I love Kame's body awakening to desire, to wanting, all the little hints, the shower scene, his chest tightening at the sight of Jin, caring about the taste of the food, getting caught like that in the pipes (!!!) and OMG, the poker table scene. Kame flipping Jin. I love all of this.

As always, looking forward to more.

[katmillia]

lol i always love you ♥

[mizuhiko05]

I love every bit of this chap. ♥
And I really like the way you write their personalities. Every one of them, it somehow makes me feel like I know them as much as they know each other. And the plot is so good. Just love it. ♥♥♥♥

[katmillia]

the personalities were definitely important, since we took so much from them and wanted to make sure we stuck to the music video (which is how we determined their roles in the group) ♥ :))) we are very glad to hear that you enjoyed this, thank you so much for reading and leaving such marvelous feedback!

[katmillia]

ahahahaha the scene in the airducts was actually NOT planned until i wrote it, and i got very happy realizing i would work it in, because it was kind of really hot and dangerous at the same time. :))) the scene with the woman obviously was; i kept going "i am writing the most uncomfortable, awkward sex scene ever!!" but we definitely wanted to highlight the way that procreation is handled in a society where there basically is no love, and they would have no need to ever be alone together. ♥ i am so happy that you are still enjoying this, bb, thanks for reading!! :))

[ashi_ga_demasu]

Okay, so that's how it happens. In the brick building. Life is hard for these people.

You got me holding my breath when Kame decided to follow Jin. And that scene in the vent, that is just...THAT IS JUST.

Again, thank you for the wonderful read. Looking forward to more :)

just need to ask you this though, is it possible you meant "faze" instead of "phase"? you also wrote "unphased" a couple of chapters back, i think

[katmillia]

I'm sure it was a typo. Ironically that's funny because I know that one GOT changed, so that means I probably copy/pasted the wrong one. Given my life, that would be something I do. I know. ;____; It's terrible. But thanks for pointing it out. :Db And for reading! ♥