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"A Storm in the West", Chapter Thirteen

Aug 21, 2009 20:40

Title: A Storm in the West
Chapter: 13/13
Fandom: Arashi
Character, Pairing(s): Sho/Jun
Rating: R
Warnings: Language and violence.
Summary: A saloon owner with an enigmatic past, an idealistic sheriff, a remorseful shotgun messenger, and the town that unites them.
( A Storm in the West [13] )

[fic] a storm in the west, [pairing] matsumoto jun/sakurai sho

Comments 3

hiro_chan February 21 2010, 13:32:18 UTC

fucking hell ( ... )

katmillia February 21 2010, 15:13:40 UTC

Awwww, wow wow!!

I don't even know where to start with this, but first off- a huuuge THANK YOU for taking the time to read this huge, entire monster! This thing is over 100k long, we discovered late last year when I did a word count on it, and that's insane! But thank you SO much for leaving us such amazing feedback and reading through the whole blasted thing. ♥ ♥

We are very happy to hear that you loved the boys in this- we tried very hard to work them in while still taking into account the background we'd give them. Like Nino, for example, had to adjust a bit because his background colored so much of how he reacted and lived, and we were worried that sometimes he didn't come across as ~Nino~ so much anymore since we gave him such an important backstory. But we are so happy that you loved them all and the way they all came together. This story is one of our babies, it was our first REAL plotted and planned collaboration and we put a lot of our heart and soul into it.

♥ ♥ You have made me smile today, thank you so much!

hiro_chan February 22 2010, 11:55:01 UTC

actually, after sho, nino is the character that left me the lasting impression. his deviousness, his anger, his hate, his pain, his snarkiness... just love. and when he started to pin for jun... awgh.

i love also sho's struggle with his own belief when it came to jun - i love him asking Jesus to free him from the temptation, i dunno, the image of him sitting alone in the old church begging for salvation is just pretty <3. and when he finally gave in. when he finally gave in - GAH! just - GAAAAH, ok???

read the aadditional part too -- the jun/sho/nino one, and that was a lovely wrap up to the whole thing and I like that nino is getting his closure with jun and sho. And I love nino keep saying "I get sakurai next." XDXD.

again, love love love this. this read like an absorbing novel that I just couldn't put down <333.