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[hieisues]

...the letter 'C' for piece of CRAP.

Title: secret love

Culprit Author's Name: prinadey shy suki

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[hieisues]

The poor child of an extreme fangirl who believes she can write. I haven't really seen one positive review for this, just a bunch of "character Mary Sue" and one saying for her to completely rewrite the story. I applauded that person.

I actually sent her a review (as I have done for the last two stories) to tell her what exactly was wrong this crap. I'm surprised I haven't been flamed yet.

[lino_en_kuldes]

I just saw the story and I think you gave her too much credit. Her title was 'secert love' and you corrected that.

Though now, I have a migraine trying to figure out what's going on. I think the author intended to follow the anime... badly.

[xxtareixx]

What the fuck is this~ [excuse my vulger language]
What OO
OMG Togashi-san's characters
Fiction raped!!! TT
NOOOOO what have the sues done to you TT
Geez one needs to learn to write proper
English people!!!
I mean How hard is it to hit enter?
And shift? And caps?!!! OO
MY eyes burn so much I gouge them out [not literally]
and banged my head against the computer screen [not litereally]
-twitch- it's so horrendous I want to maul
the Author with some fricken sharp weapons
Like a knif, a Katana or even a frying pan would do!!!
--;;; ugh!!

[control_paradox]

*Cringes and squirms* If I stab it with the symbol of the Antichrist, will it die?