(Untitled)

[hieisues]

This is one of the longest stories I've actually done since I usually do new ones fresh off the press. It keeps me from re-doing one.

Title: Turning Tables

Culprit Author's Name: 4-is-lovely

Rating:

Comments

*tears*

[sirena_lune]

At least when I made up my American Spirit Detectives, they came with their own version of Botan(Bobby) and a sex-deprived Koenma(Princess Elysia).

And nobody went out with any body... Except for Elysia, but that was a big part of the plot...

And at least I haven't published it yet...

it would have been better than this anyway...

[lolly_squelch]

Out of 158 reviews, there was only one that even vaguely resembled concrit and all it said was that her OCs might be Sues. Nice to see that the majority of reviewers on FF.net have such discerning taste...

Again, well done for sifting through this tripe, I couldn't even read the exerpt you provided above!