Late comment is late, but may I just say that your writing is nosebleed-inducing? The anime kind.
It's really great to see another writer lace their work with so many religious references (granted, I don't read much fanfic, so I wouldn't know who else does.)
However, if I may so bold as to point out some things I noticed in the first part: "Chrome focuses on candy and cokes." Intentional, or did a letter slip through the cracks? and "it's big and it fat"
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It's really great to see another writer lace their work with so many religious references (granted, I don't read much fanfic, so I wouldn't know who else does.)
However, if I may so bold as to point out some things I noticed in the first part:
"Chrome focuses on candy and cokes." Intentional, or did a letter slip through the cracks?
and
"it's big and it fat"
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