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Jul 23, 2004 22:49


Everytime you totured  me

You pushed  me closer to  insanity

Realizing that day after day

My sanity goes farther away

Knowing that you are doing this

Makes me have one dreadful wish

Being that I cannot take this any longer

My wish for you to go away getting stronger

Planning the day for me to take my chance

Wishing you would die at every single ( Read more... )

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lifehalffull July 24 2004, 02:54:29 UTC
yamilee, that poem is deffinitally one of ur best!

i especially love the last 4 lines

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anonymous July 24 2004, 02:56:36 UTC
wow and you wonder why you see a phsychiatrist or the phsycho lady or watever the fck her job is .. talking about suicide notes .. weirdo
at least you can admit that your "sanity goes farther away" .. i couldve todl you taht one .. haha yamileee i love you soo much you freak !! haha your soo cool with your suicide poems haha

son you know i love your poem .. it is very very good and maybe if i say something good youll stop talking about killing .. cus now im scared .. hehe !! your so great !! yay for yamilees poem !!

AHH .. im gunna kill my cousins .. ugh i dont like them .. maybe yoru next poem could be about killing them .. haha later homes !!

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iamxsoxtrendy July 24 2004, 03:35:01 UTC

do you need a hug?
i am not kidding about the hug thing
but the poem is good, i like it, and i don't like much things
but i bet you 5 bucks that you couldn't write somethign happy unless it involed Noremac

HA!

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hightilidie73 July 24 2004, 05:15:32 UTC
When I wake up in the morning I see the Sun
And i reach over to my ................. aaaaawww fuck it......its to late.....but its on! by the way the next word was going to be gun.....haha

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ghettotaku July 24 2004, 18:09:23 UTC
wow... someone needs some love. j/p lol its good. so much suicidal friends i have; so im numb to the morbidity of it. but i like it alot. maybe you should write a book?

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