You Better Feel It

Jun 11, 2005 02:10

This piece was written about 2 years ago. I wanted to write something that had a "rap" style to it. It was one of those times when the pen just started writing and when I was done I realized it was one of the truest things I had ever written ( Read more... )

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Not a poem bamboomedia June 11 2005, 20:36:14 UTC
ok your rhyme is tight yo! It wasn't what I thought it was going to be. It has good flow and great content. All you need is a hook and this puppy would be ready to lay out a track in the studio! It has yet to be oscar potential like Lose Yourself but with a little work you never know. (I suppose we'd need a movie as well. lol)

P.S Did you love the freestyle battle at the end of 8-mile or what? Do you know if he wrote all those for the script? I haven't listened to the commentary.

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Re: Not a poem highway_7 June 12 2005, 15:26:03 UTC
Yeah, a nice Dre beat behind it would be nice, huh? I would imagine that Eminem wrote all of the his freestyle scenes. You should watch the freestyle battles in the special features. They had some of the extras audition to battle Eminem and they were "possibly" going to use it in the movie (I think they just thought it would be a good special feature on the DVD and wanted to keep the extras spirits up). Em goes against 3 people. It's all unscripted. Its some funny stuff.

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