Weep, Little Lion Man

Mar 29, 2011 22:28

Title: Weep, Little Lion Man
Author/Artist: hihippy 
Character(s) or Pairing(s): England, America. Mentions of France, Canada, everyone else I guess, and a vague India OC.
Rating: Tish. Somewhat sensitive stuff.
Warnings: Family, Hurt/Comfort. No pairing implications in this one, le gasp.
Summary: De-anoning a fill. Prompt: Annoyed that yet again England ( Read more... )

arthur kirkland, hurt/comfort, america, england, family, alfred f. jones

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vemela March 31 2011, 19:12:46 UTC
As I have said to you before, I love the use of the Charles de Montesquieu quote. It fits so perfectly.

The raw emotion in this is amazing, you can't help but feel for both Alfred and Arthur. And, although platonic USUK may not be my favourite, the way you portrayed it was fantastic. Arthur's speech was so heart-felt. Quite simply, I think what he says is beautifully true.

You filled this so well~!

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kasumicc April 1 2011, 15:29:00 UTC
This was a very interesting premise and I loved how it was executed; the flashbacks, the obvious distress in Alfred...and I loved how sweet the ending was. You did a great job on writing a story about brotherhood (or parenthood) and them in modern times :)

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bowucorm April 12 2011, 22:03:23 UTC
Great work keep it coming, best blog on earth

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quqagift April 15 2011, 16:54:34 UTC
Thanks for posting, I like this blog!

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moondrop97 May 31 2012, 09:39:36 UTC
Amazing. You portray emotions so well. And the transitions- very effective. I was imagining a movie while reading this. This would make an awesome movie, trust me.You are a very talented author. If you ever write a book, let me know. I'd buy it in an instant!

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hihippy May 31 2012, 10:34:31 UTC
sdf that means a lot to me, thank you. ;__;

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