Heh. It's quite nice to meet you, I actually was fangirling you (and agreeing with you) during the fake concrit debate that wasn't, so, hi and thank you!
Wow. Thank you so much for actually reading through and making actual concrit. I would love to know who you are after reveals so i can thank you in person. This was crit I needed! Thank you. ♥
(I'm sorry I didn't get to responding properly earlier! I was too squeeful because WHOA. CONCRIT. FOR REALS.)
I was getting all kinds of mixed signals from Nase towards the end of the fic. Thank you for some very spot-on comments. The original plan was to have Nase dump him, but then it was rejected when I realized it wasn't going to happen without some very OOC actions. The fic's shift in mood may be attributed to that--I apologize and will do better editing in the future.
Nase has been an incredibly difficult character to write. I'm not sure if I'm the only one who has this problem, but when I identify too closely with a character, or want too much to be a character, it's almost impossible for me to write that character without inserting myself. At the same time, I'm quite aware that Nase and I react very differently.
Are you thinking about soap? No. No. You aren't.IRL, I was, actually. I'm sorry, don't hit me. I fail as a sex partner. Probably didn't help that it wasn't my One True Love, so this comment is well-taken
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I was getting all kinds of mixed signals from Nase towards the end of the fic.
Thank you for some very spot-on comments. The original plan was to have Nase dump him, but then it was rejected when I realized it wasn't going to happen without some very OOC actions. The fic's shift in mood may be attributed to that--I apologize and will do better editing in the future.
Nase has been an incredibly difficult character to write. I'm not sure if I'm the only one who has this problem, but when I identify too closely with a character, or want too much to be a character, it's almost impossible for me to write that character without inserting myself. At the same time, I'm quite aware that Nase and I react very differently.
Are you thinking about soap? No. No. You aren't.IRL, I was, actually. I'm sorry, don't hit me. I fail as a sex partner. Probably didn't help that it wasn't my One True Love, so this comment is well-taken ( ... )
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