when will this loneliness be over?

Jun 08, 2009 17:35

I should probably point out that I title my entries with song lyrics from whatever I'm listening to at the time. I have noticed that they seem to trend towards the depressive... please don't take this as a sign of me being depressed! I am a happy, chirpy bunny of happiness. Who is going to be watching the hell out of her HAARP dvd, cos she's ( Read more... )

writing: that bloody trenchcoat, trenchcoat love, writing: fanfic, writing: supernatural

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hikari_datenshi June 8 2009, 18:11:13 UTC
Gotta love the trenchcoat! I find it slightly bizarre that Misha claims to hate the thing. o.O

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad the shmoop helped. ♥

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hikari_datenshi June 8 2009, 21:05:39 UTC
I KNOW, RIGHT?! Trenchcoats rock my socks off. And yes, there's something about the Impala too. ♥

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thevinegarworks June 8 2009, 17:34:48 UTC
DUDE. THIS FIC. I want to hug it and cuddle it and call it George. So cute!

And besides, I think it was well-deserved. Cas' Columbo!coat needs some lovin', too many people bash it. Meanwhile I'm over here scratching my head going, "Why is that goddamn trench coat so obscenely hot?!"

And then slapping myself on the forehead because duh, it's on Misha. Equals hotness.

Anyway, I loved this! Favorite line:

“There’s such a thing as taking the analogy too far.”

Oh, Dean. ♥

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hikari_datenshi June 8 2009, 18:13:28 UTC
...I... I like trenchcoats on anyone. It's a thing. But I agree! What's with the random coat!hate!?! We should start a comm for the coat or something, lawl.

Thanks for the feedback!! :DD I don't often write shmoopy stuff, and I so wanted it to be porns, but alas. Glad it sort of worked out! ♥

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thevinegarworks June 8 2009, 20:23:09 UTC
We should start a comm for the coat or something, lawl.

BEST. IDEA. EVER.

I don't often write shmoopy stuff, and I so wanted it to be porns, but alas.

Sequel, mayhaps? :D

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hikari_datenshi June 8 2009, 21:04:54 UTC
Sequel, mayhaps? :D

YOU DIRTY ROTTEN ENABLER.

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keeperofdestiny June 8 2009, 19:02:00 UTC
Is the coat a fob watch? :p (That only makes sense if you watch Doctor Who)

ANYway, thank you for participating in our Comm! This fic is great, I love Dean getting caught out and starting to babble. :D

And the end, awwww!!! They are so adorable!!

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hikari_datenshi June 8 2009, 19:04:28 UTC
Oh god, now I want to do a crossover where the coat IS a fob watch. XDD And there go the ideas, ticking around...

If you guys keep prompting us, I'll keep writing! XD This fandom, maaan, it's killing me with ideas.

Thanks for the comment! ♥

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ruggerdavey June 8 2009, 23:23:43 UTC
This was pretty cute, and Dean's discussion of wet t-shirt competitions to Cas was quite funny.

However, I have to disagree with your American friend. I have known all of one American person in my life who has used the word bloody as an adjective when they weren't talking about things covered in blood. There may be a small sample of Americans who do use it, but it's not a lot of people by any means. As such, that totally threw me out of the story. It didn't seem at all like a word Dean would use, especially with the story being so solidly set in working-class middle America.

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hikari_datenshi June 9 2009, 00:13:22 UTC
Thanks for commenting!

But hot dang, I wish I'd not listened to him now. I think I might go and alter it all the way through, with consideration of your response. Thanks so much for pointing it out! :D

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ruggerdavey June 9 2009, 00:46:21 UTC
No problem; I am happy to help. I was a little worried about saying something, so I'm glad you were receptive to the comment.

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batmanboxers June 9 2009, 00:49:47 UTC
Wet t-shirt competitions! I can't get over how cute this is and the analogy and awwww!

The ghost in a sauna made me go all xD

This was too brilliant. And I agree with keeperofdestiny, CASTIEL IS A TIME LORD.

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hikari_datenshi June 9 2009, 00:52:52 UTC
And now I have the idea to write the missing sauna-ghost scene. THANKS A LOT, BLOODY ENABLERS. *grumbles* ONLY NOT REALLY ILUSFM BBS!!

CAS IS TOTES A TIME LORD!! And I dunno why, but I really like the idea of him having a stop watch too, like Ianto... ¬_¬

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