Writing retrospective part 1

[hikarugenji]

Inspired by some discussions with friends over the weekend, I decided to start doing something I've considered doing for a while -- basically a history of my own (fiction) writing. What better place than LJ to do such an egotistical project. :) I know at least 1 person is interested in seeing this so sorry to everyone else

Comments

Wonderful

[clairvoidant]

Nice. Archin (your Archenemy) should probably not have gone on that dam. I also like the part where you (in the story) wonder how you were able to reach your gun.

[khiemtran]

Looks like you had a good feel for when to throw in a reversal.