Dribble Poem ^^;;

[aiyuuka]

This is what happens when I read Twincest Fics before trying to work on my English Poetry Summative. >.< Argh.
I can't use this in English, obviously... I'm not too sure what my teacher would think of it anyway. xD

Here you go. x.o;; It doesn't have a name.

It started with one simple kiss
That tasted sweet with taboo’d bliss
And though they’d always

Comments

[pirate_dingo]

Very nice. I especially like the fourth and fifth lines. =)

I've had a terrible night, and this made me feel a little better. I love your way of poem..ing. XD

[aiyuuka]

Thankyou. xD I hope my teacher thinks I'm as good at poeming as you do when he doles out my mark.
I'm glad I made you feel a little better! <3
Thanks for reading. ^^

[misterwalnut]

It was nice to read! Very structured and symmetrical. My favourite verse was the 4th stanza; it kind of feels metaphorical. :)

I'm not a big fan of poetry, but this was an enjoyable read.

[aiyuuka]

Thanks! ^^
To hear positive feedback from someone who doesn't even like poetry makes me feel fluffy inside. x3
The fourth is my favourite too; probably the most well-planned out of this entire thing. (Yay spontaneity?!)

[gakku_rei33]

I do--AWESOME! <3

[aiyuuka]

Aaaah, thankyou! <3
Such a strong reply! x3
Thankyou for reading! ^^

[gakku_rei33]

lol

NP ^^ :3

Can't wait for more! As for mine...The finals are swamping me -_-U