Oh Hil, that was lovely!!! I'm finally catching up on LJ and am happy to have seen this and done the whole clicky thing :-)
I particularly liked this passage:
“Thanks, you know, for…” She started crying, the emotion sudden and catching him off-guard. This time it was the quiet, pretty kind of tears-the ones that broke his heart as soon as they started falling. He wanted to hug her but couldn’t, and fidgeted instead-with his hands, feet, avoiding saying anything, repressing the urge to step into her, and hold her up, and say that everything was going to be okay, now, everything
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Thank you so very much. It's turning into a saga of sorts, there's a second part, from Veronica's POV, and then a third I'm working on now, which is the smutty component. How smutty, I'm not yet sure, but who am I to question the muse, you know what I mean?
catching up on my fic reading. this was really lovely. and the thing I liked most was the restraint. in Logan, but also in this not being the typical fall into bed drunk and have hot sex fic. (which I myself am guilty of)
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I particularly liked this passage:
“Thanks, you know, for…” She started crying, the emotion sudden and catching him off-guard. This time it was the quiet, pretty kind of tears-the ones that broke his heart as soon as they started falling. He wanted to hug her but couldn’t, and fidgeted instead-with his hands, feet, avoiding saying anything, repressing the urge to step into her, and hold her up, and say that everything was going to be okay, now, everything ( ... )
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