[Pornfest Contest at MeinBruder] Klage und Anfang

[hime_chan17]

Title: Klage und Anfang

Rating: R18

Characters/Pairing: PrussiaXGermany

Warning: This story contains strong langue, non-consentual/dubious-consentual rape, and use of both human and country names.

Summary: Prussia is fed up with how Germany has left him alone in order to spend time with Italy. Then one night, enough is enough. Prussia was going to

Comments

[gabby_hetalia]

;A; So very sad. Those poor brothers...
So well written, but wow. Thats defently going to stay with me.
Poor Germany! I feel worse for him. I think. Actually I don't know, it sucked for both of them.

But anyway, fantastic fic, I really liked it. Sorry about my ramblings. ^_^

[hime_chan17]

it's all good :D comments are much appreciated~

don't know why, but i really wanted to do sad kind of story XP even though there's really not much porn in it.

thanks again for reading!

[aoi_aka]

You fic made me wibble and get teary eyed! It just tore at my heart to see them suffering this way. At least in the end things balanced out for both of them. It was also good to see Italy playing a part in their drama and being the reason for this jealousy induced drama. Very well done! Good luck with the contest. :D

[hime_chan17]

thank you :D
yeah, i kind of teared up while writting it XD

[thoth_dragon]

Okay I'm so weird and sick for this but I fuckin' LOVED this fic! Yes, it was sad, but so fucking hot!

[I'm a total sucker for non-con in fics and also a real fan of bottom!/uke!Germany]

I was half hoping for Prussia to just walk out the door and have Austria come the next day... also half hoping to see this story in parts, so the ending surprised me a bit. BUT! I loved it.

[hime_chan17]

haha thanks! :D

i would have had it in parts, but since it was for a contest, i don't think that would have worked as well XP

oh man, i REALLY wanted prussia to just walk out... that's actually what i was planning on having him do the whole time. hmmm... perhaps i should write an alternate ending? XD

[thoth_dragon]

Yes, please, yes!

Mm.. maybe write one in parts? Like... this time Prussia can come home drunk and sexually frustrated and *unf* [rape ensues] <3

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I'm so weird. But damn I love my bottom!Germany [consensual or not] <3

[hime_chan17]

i don't know if i'll rewrite the whole story into parts but i'll work on an alternate ending XD but if i have time i'll write a completly new one where germany is on the bottom and most likely forced into it. just for you <3