A Musing

[himmelkrieg]

Entry updated 01-19-2008 2226hrs
The setting sun over the harbor and the glow of the barely-lit sodium lamps bathed the streets in hues of pale yellows and oranges, having no effect on the hustle and bustle of daily life. The city didn’t sleep, it cared not for the time of day. It continued to live and breathe, the people cascading through the

Comments

[sir_cortez]

Ooo neat! *click* Nice read. Keep it up! =D

[deathlikescats]

Good start!

Two things that bugged me whilst reading (just cus there's a lil Nazi in me);

"climbing into the sky like liquid diamond" - should be diamonds

"things that set him aside." - Should be apart instead of aside.

other than that, I'm looking forward to more.

[himmelkrieg]

Diamonds implies plural, I was going for more of the faceted effect of light refraction you get when looking at light through a single cut diamond. ^_^

As for "apart" ... Fix't! :D