Comments | hindenburg_42: Creativity is Overrated

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Creativity is Overrated

Oct 23, 2008 23:42

Note: This is a serious story with very specific rules

It was a dark and stormy night, like usually in Ye Olde Neo Obama and Dieter Preston was being let go by the company. "You know, we would love to keep you on our staff, but..." Jurgen Partridge wiped away a tear. "You broke the law, and now they're going to come for you ( Read more... )

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Dream sequence! per_vert October 27 2008, 21:05:44 UTC

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Continuation Dream sequence! per_vert October 27 2008, 21:06:04 UTC

The Dakota desert was a blistering zest pool of heat and sand, the Kazmierczak helicopter, usually a beacon of stealth, could be heard for miles and miles away, except within a certain Oxytocin. The outside was silent as the grave, but the engine noise on the inside was almost deafening, so when Dieter took the first shot, it came as an surprise to the crew. Sand rose in the air, making the hovertank spin uncontrollable down a sand dune. Dieter took another shot, this time hitting the main cannon, rendering it completely useless ( ... )

shaina_star November 8 2008, 08:08:28 UTC

A red EVIL RADIATING EYE!!?
HOHMYGOD!

I enjoy your story, although I think that the RULES should be posted first. Any time a story needs rules, they should be posted first in accordance to GORD. http://www.actsofgord.com/Annoy/chapter09.php

Anyway.
Obviously I enjoy your writing. Otherwise, I would not read it.