the world outside

May 27, 2005 01:18

Cautious venturing at night led me to the glistening river. No moon tonight, but the streetlights reflected kindly in the hurried waters. I sat ridgedly on a stone, adjusting to the rustling grasses and crickets chirping. I sat for a while... just looking at the shimmering water. The small waves absorbed my focus. The streaks of silver and navy ( Read more... )

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yoers May 28 2005, 05:11:54 UTC
Maggie, Gosia, Margaret, MAGAGA!

Your entry was simply amazing. Short, yet so powerful. The description simply brought tears into my eyes.

Urs in JC,

Seb.

GOD BLESS!

PS- Just out of curiousity, did the fraction of the poem which i was working on in any way inspire you to nestle yourself in the arms of night's many beauties?

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hindered_speech May 29 2005, 01:41:59 UTC
I didn't think of it when I got home. I go on these walks quite often. But I enjoyed what you wrote, and am glad that we share an appreciation for God's creation.
Observant and peaceful... it was a great way to end an awesome day

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stefa May 30 2005, 14:46:04 UTC
beautiful.

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