One of the queen’s handmaids accompanies me to my trip to the underground cellar where they kept prisoners of the palace. It wasn’t anything like I’d imagined. I had this image where everything was being dwelled by rats and slime. I was grateful for imagining the worst.
Most of the blocks were unoccupied and as we neared the one furthest to the
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This is getting more interesting. xD
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i'm so glad you like it :D
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i'm glad you like it. thank you so much for the comment and the read.
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I just realised that this fic was written in first-person point of view and I usually don't like those so if I didn't realise it, it means it's a job well done! ^^ Taemin's personality and expressions make the reading flow really well and it doesn't get out of rhythm.
So bitchy Krystal appears! XD And Minho is not attracted to women! Boa is such a cool devoted queen/mom!
I really like this story. The feel, the rhythm, the emotions... though it makes me curious easily.
Oh and I went through your masterlist and found that you actually wrote my first favourite 2min fic which is the one where Taemin is a girl. It just suited my tastes so well (and I wrote one genderswitch with about the same line of thought before so I was happy to find something similar!)
Keep up the good work!
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-- i know what you mean. first person perspective is always a challenge to write. and i like challenges so. haha.
oh, im glad you liked a previous fic of mine. :)
thank you for commenting and reading. i appreciate it :D
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i'm glad you liked it.
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and it gets more interesting... i love how you portray Taemin.
thanks for sharing ^__^
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writing in first person is always a challenge and i try so. ahe. thank you.
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