Winter Part I

Mar 21, 2009 06:22

His feet seemed small but stretched out across endless blocks of concrete as he determinedly trudged through the winter night into uncertainty. The sidewalk was broken, raised, uneven and old, the snow that lay packed by dozens of previous walkers and dreamers did not aid in the ease of his steps. After many miles of changing backgrounds mixed the ( Read more... )

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jahurley March 23 2009, 03:45:42 UTC
i like the imagery a lot, the way you paint it im sure is exactly how it looks. also, i love the very few words of it but it still set the mood. lastly, i like the no ending ending. not everything needs an ending, and this at the end left me with like some hope about love.

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