fanfic: cacophony

Mar 04, 2009 23:32

I sort of came home today, read some fanfics, and decided, "I'MMA GONNA WRITE SOMETHING TODAY."
Here it is. XD;;
Next time I post, I'll be flinging Axel/Roxas. KHR, too, if I can somehow write both simultaneously.

Title: Cacophony
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairing: America/England, but you gotta squint.
Summary: Buon compleanno!

“Now, now,” says France, smoothly, smiling languidly, “you’re not going to sit here and throw a petty little tantrum when your firstborn is celebrating his birthday.” )

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twistedsheets10 March 4 2009, 16:12:06 UTC
*grins*

If I'm squinting, it's because I'm crying. This is just, so...awww.

(just curious, what is wrong between England and America?)

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hiroya_chan March 4 2009, 16:40:07 UTC
;w; Thanks for reading!

(Ahh ahhh, it's 'cause it's America's birthday, see - Independence Day and all. America fought its way out of England's colonial rule. :3
I-I'm sorry, the fic's so vague. Augh aughhh I've added footnotes.)

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twistedsheets10 March 4 2009, 16:47:33 UTC
Ah, I got the Independence Day. XD I had thought they had a bigger quarrel that made this day more unbearable for both of them.

(hmmm...I wonder if England goes to Canada's birthday and stays in the party?)

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hiroya_chan March 5 2009, 13:28:19 UTC
Ahahahhh, I think it's doujinshi influence or something - I've always imagined they had a really big fight before America rolled out his guns. XD;;

(;A;; I've never thought about that, hmm hmmmm. you should write something on that, huhuhh :3)

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naoko_andre March 4 2009, 17:28:50 UTC
So cute!! It made want to cry a little ;w; Poor Arthur... Poor Alfred... But France rocks!! XD He made Arthur feel guilty (i think)!!! And the end was so... awwwwww... *w* Arthur should improve in his cooking skills XD XD lol

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hiroya_chan March 5 2009, 13:30:39 UTC
France gave England a little push! :3

Thank you for reading! <33

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helreginn March 4 2009, 17:35:46 UTC
So, basically. All I have to sums up to ---> ;_______________________;

This. It pushes all of my buttons. So I can't say anything more than incoherent fangirly gushing. XD Therefore, ;_________________; works.

Yeah. ;_____________; for a good measure.

B'aaaaaaaaaaaaaw, England!

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helreginn March 4 2009, 17:38:08 UTC
All I have to say* I meant. I was too busy ;__________________;-ing to type properly.

*goes back to ;______________________;*

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hiroya_chan March 5 2009, 13:51:51 UTC
I-I didn't intend for it to be ;________________________;
/hands tissues

Thanks for reading! ;W;

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coded March 4 2009, 17:57:41 UTC
Awww, how sad D:
It was so well-written and I felt bad for both of them T_____T

I was just thinking yesterday that I hadn't seen an update from you in a while and then..BAM! XD

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hiroya_chan March 5 2009, 14:30:05 UTC
I-It was a happy ending...! XD;
Thank you for reading <333333!!!

Hahahahh, I've been a little busy! But things have settled down! :3 I'll go catch up with your journal now. >D

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colevic March 4 2009, 20:51:46 UTC
Awwwww, so bittersweet. I love these two. Good job. ^^

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hiroya_chan March 5 2009, 14:34:04 UTC
Thanks for reading! ;w; I LOVE THEM, TOO ( *W*)

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