fanfic: ultimo

[hiroya_chan]

what am i doing? i am trying to write 1827. let's take note of "trying" here, because it's a very important word.

this is the first time i've written a 1827 ficcy, but do come hard at me with your criticism, still. X) i digress; it was very, very difficult to write this ficcy, because the plotbunny wasn't very enthusiastic in playing with me, and

Comments

[labymiro]

To me, Hibari can either be seme or uke depending on who he is with but even if it wasn't the case, this was great. The interactiosn,the glimpse of scenes before Tsuna's death and the insertion of Yamamoto -- all brilliant.

[hiroya_chan]

KANON, YOUR ICONS ARE SO PRETTY!!! X3 X3 X3 Thy hath impeccable taste. X]

Heehee, IT TOOK INCREDIBLE SELF-CONTROL TO KEEP HIBARI SEME. ASDJFL;DLKJSLDJCBMN TOO MUCH UKE-NESS IN HIM. X3 X3 X3

Yamamoto was albeit unexpected...initially, I planned to write from Gokudera's point of view. :O

I'm happy you liked this, too! X) Your comments always make me go all smiley~! :3

[labymiro]

I don't make any of these icons; all the great work done by the almight iconsiners LOL I'm clueless in graphic stuff.

Hibari is... switchable for me. Def uke for Dino but mostly seme for others cuz I just can't imagine Hibari letting them take control when he considers all of them to be weaker than him XD Well, I guess Yama's smile is kinda invincible LOL

[hiroya_chan]

Hahahahax, but you choose to use them! :3

Huhuhuhuhuhu, 18D is one of my fetishes. XP There are one or two really good ones I've come across before. :O

YESH, YAMAMOTO'S SMILE IS THE INVINCIBLE SMILE. X3 X3 X3

[ola_verde]

This was amazing. I love how you wrote their characters in this. Hibari can be either uke or seme depending who he is with~ And this is your first time trying 1827? It's a really good job you did there~

[hiroya_chan]

COUGHCOUGHCOUGH YOU JUST MADE MY EGO SWELL UP LIKE A BALLOON. D:

Heehee, I'm uber happy you liked this. Yesh, it's my first shot at 1827 - I had a lot of problems initially, but it looks like it's turned out ohkaye. :3

Thanks for commenting! It's greatly appreciated. X3

[ola_verde]

YEY FOR EGOS SWELLING UP LIKE A BALLOON~

I did hear that Hibari is a hard character to write. And when you put him in romance it must be hard seeing what he thinks and everything. Yes it turned out very ohkaye~

[idiedcauseofyou]

I think I almost burst out crying with Yamamoto at the end *tear* AMAZING work as usual and great job with the 1827 in this, not at all OOC as some writers would do. Looking forward to reading future works ^_^

[hiroya_chan]

YOUR ICON IS SO FABUTASTIC. Are text icons the trend now? XP I've been seeing them a lot lately - with all the witty lines.

NOW THAT YOU MENTION IT, YAMAMOTO IS HEARTBREAKINGLY OOC AT THE END. D: D: D: ARGHHHHHHS. A horrigible mistake there. TOT

Still, thank you very much for commenting! I'm happy you read, and liked this!!! Your support is always, always appreciated, and much loved. X3 X3 X3

[hiroya_chan]

Thank you! :3

I try to keep the characters IC. Somehow, it makes the ficcy feel a little moar real. :3

[saya]

ç_ç omg I'm crying....
a great fic ._.
*puts in memories*

[hiroya_chan]

Wheeeeeeeeeeee, thankies! I'm happy you liked it. X3 X3 X3 THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING!!!

[icedcandy]

Trying? What are you talking about?! This is wonderful! I love it! OMG, Tsuna ;__; And it's got just the right amount of angst ♥ You did such a good job on it ;w; Thank you ♥ And, I see you couldn't keep out the 8018 moment XDD~

*blushes* A-and you said you like my ficcies ;w; I feel so flattered~ Y-you're so sweet =w= ♥

[hiroya_chan]

SQUEEEEESQUEEEEEEEEEEEESQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~!!! I'M UBERUBERUBER HAPPY YOU LIKED IT!!! I WAS WORRIED IT'LL BE ALL WEIRD AND TOTALLY NOT WHAT YOU WERE EXPECTING BECAUSE THERE'S LIKE, ONLY ONE KISS, AND THE PROMPT IS SUCH A TEENY PART OF THE STORY. DX

8018 BUBBLES IN MY BLOOD ETERNALLY. XP XP XP I was actually aiming to write from Gokudera's POV, but halfway through I scrapped it, and switched to Yamamoto. X]

YOUR FICCIES RAWK MY LITTLE WORLD, WHEEEEEEEEEEE~!!! X3 X3 X3

AGAINAGAINAGAIN I'M UBER HAPPY YOU LIKED THISHHH. :3 THANKS FOR COMMENTING! ;W;

[icedcandy]

Y-you're...YOU'RE SO CUTE!! >w< ♥ Of course I liked it!! It's not what I was expecting, but that's one of the good parts ♥ I really do love it ;w;

[hiroya_chan]

WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, I'M REALLYREALLYREALLY HAPPY!!!!!! X3 X3 X3 X3 X3 X3