Suspended: Mal/River: Short Fic: NC-17: >2000 word count

[hisalbatross]

Title: Suspended
Word Count: 2000 ish words
Author: hisalbatross aka thefalloficarus
Disclaimer: I don't own any of these characters; I just like to play
with them. Joss is Boss though, and don't you forget it! ;)
Rating: NC-17
Characters: River, Mal (Mal/River)
Spoilers/Warnings: Post-BDM
Summary: This is my first song fic and my first fic of the naughty contect. lol. thank

Comments

[gwenfrewi72]

Don't know the song but I really liked this fic.

My muse has been stuck on a smutty scene of late and I think you just inspired her. Thanks! :D

[hisalbatross]

Yay! Let the smut prevail! :)

[heatherhouse]

Whoa! I liked that! I love how hurried and passionate all the movements were and yet you managed to capture all the details. Nice work, this is wonderful smut to me. :P

[hisalbatross]

Yay! Thank you so much! I'm glad you liekd it :)

[diamondinsanity]

Aww... That was pretty smut. It was so artsy and sweet. Delovely job.

[hisalbatross]

hehe. yay I'm glad you liked it. I kept wanting to steer from the smut, but I made myself stay on course so it wasn't all too hardcore lol, but it was a start for me! lol.

[luxuria_oceanus]

Hey! You didn't tell me you posted it *sticks out tongue* naughty girl! Well, I already gave you my opinion for it, but I'll say it again. Very very good smut and your vocabulary always makes me go ga ga, so you know I like it.

[faithfulriver26]

i loved the mixture of this song and this fic. they work so well together, at least the lyrics do
and now for my much needed shower, which i blame you for XD
girl this is fucking hott! i can't believe this is your first naughty content fic!!!
i loved the last line. it was so sweet

"Alive, Bao Bai, I feel alive."

i love that!