Fic: echoes through the caverns of a chest (the give and take) (1/1)

[hitlikehammers]

Title: echoes through the caverns of a chest (the give and take)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Sherlock/John
Word Count: 3,670
Summary: John’s heartbeat is the first and only symphony that Sherlock doesn’t quite feel worthy enough to know. (Part IV of the Cardiophilia Sequence; Follows suddenly your heart showed me my way, the beat and beating heart, and

Comments

[insistent_bass]

I've absolutely fallen for your writing, this series has been amazing, brilliant; I just want to wrap myself up in them & stay there. Really wonderful, thanks for sharing :)

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you so much; I am so pleased you're enjoying this, and I hope you continue to :)

[tygtig]

God, I love it. I have a thing (purely non-sexual) for heartbeats, a beating heart means life and it's at the same time soothing and tense - will there be another beat?
You captured it perfectly. Of course Sherlock would be fucking riveted by the sound of Johns heart.

[hitlikehammers]

Thank you! I'm so pleased to hear that you think this concept works, and that the execution of it rings true with these characters :)

[na_shao]

I wanted to comment earlier but couldn't, and just, oh my god, how are you even real, this is so brilliant, I love you thanks bye.

No, really, it's just as fantastic as the other parts are, and it just gets better the more you write this story, so I'm just amazed and weeping in a corner because I can't even.

[hitlikehammers]

You are marvelous. Thank you so much, lovely <3