Ashtray Heart [11/13]

Jul 16, 2012 22:28

Title: Ashtray Heart [11/13]
Pairing: OnHo, 2Min
Rating: R
Word Count: 2036
Genre: angst, smut, slice of life
Summary: Minho cheated. And now he regrets it dearly.

Previous chapters: PROLOGUE, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10

Little does he know what awaits him at home. )

✿type: gay, ♫other: fanfic, Ωgenre: angst, ✂fic: ashtray heart, ☃lenght: chaptered, ☂pairing: onho, ☂pairing: 2min, Ωgenre: smut, ✎rating: R, Ωgenre: slice of life, ✿type: ot3

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kasayu July 16 2012, 21:32:00 UTC
I AM FUCKING CRYING OMG WHY DO I LOVE IT SO MUCH EVEN WHEN EVERYTHING GOES SO WRONG AND YOU LEAVE ME WITH A CLIFFHANGER ASFLGJHGLJHD WHAT IS THIS SORCERY TAT ( ... )

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hitoshisakurai July 22 2012, 09:01:20 UTC
WHAT WHAT BB DON'T CRY OMG WAE YOUR COMMENT SO AMAZING DANG I JUST LOVE YOU OKAY?! /SOBS HARD

Omg, you've no idea how happy it made me ;~~~; to make you like a story about a pairing you don't even like that much, gosh, what are words>/////< And, it's my favourite of my stories too, kind of... even though I like 'Worthy of you' too, I have it all pictured and stuff but it's kind of un-writable for me atm. Lol.
But, really, you saying this is just... jongkey-tastic TT______TT

And thank you for saying that it's real!! ;~~~~; I always try to make it as realistic as possible, so I often try to sort of creep into the characters' heads and become them and just act natural, idk *SCHIZOPHRENIA, THERE, I SAID IT* So I'm sooooo happy it works ;~~~~;

I love this Jjong too, ngl, I want to write more of him, otl
And, ne, I see that! *_* I actually still think about your story at least once a day /is a creep/, it still affects me to no end tbqh
Also, this scene was kind of really hard to write, I didn't want to screw it up>///< like, I didn't ( ... )

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itsjustjodie July 16 2012, 21:50:55 UTC
JONGHYUN YOU STUPID SON OF A BITCH! WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU!
AND MINHO, WHY OUT OF ALL DAYS WOULD YOU LEAVE YOUR FUCKING PHONE, WHY?? WHY THE FUCK WERE YOU NOT CAREFULL YOU DIP SHIT!!
UGHHHHH I WOULD BE GLADLY CURSE THE SHIT OUT OF BOTH YOU GUYS, BUT I DON'T WANNA OFFEND ANYONE HERE, SO I'M JUST GOING TO LEAVE IT AT THAT..
omg Taeminnie....
I'm like crying and my hands are shaking, i can barely write a fucking response to this..
i wanted him to find out, but just not like this.... not like this....

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hitoshisakurai July 22 2012, 08:23:51 UTC
/hides in a corner/ don't hit me, please T^T
I take it as it awoke some emotions in you *well, I bet it did x"D*, which makes me really happy ^.^ tho, yeah /runs back to the corner/
Good thing this story is coming to the end ;~~~;
Thank you for commenting!!

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lumi_san July 16 2012, 23:33:58 UTC
Waaaaaaaa!! You understand me, and used portuguese words, how cute :D
Anyway... now commenting:
OMFG O.O Jonghyun, this kind of things can't be discussed by phone! Stupid! It's all your blame... well, is not. It's Minho blame. Yeah.
Poor Taemin... but you need to know.
Minho, your idiot, saw what you done with two precious persons? Ò.Ó
ASLHJSGAASKJALHD WHERE IS JINKI? I want know about him *O*
I'm waiting for the next anxiously \Õ/
Congratulations by enter in university :D
"I will kill everything you love" LOL LOL LOL i laughed so hard

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hitoshisakurai July 22 2012, 08:26:04 UTC
Yupp, I'm crazy when it comes to languages and I know Spanish, so x"D
You'll know about Jinki soon~and, if Jonghyun knew Minho would forget his phone, he wouldn't have sent him such a message, but... yeah, it's not the wisest thing to convey in a text message .____.
I laughed so hard too, hence I put this gif in the end xDD It fit just perfectly xD
And, thank you!! Obrigada!! :DD

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hitoshisakurai July 22 2012, 08:21:41 UTC
I need them too, but I'm kinda stuck rn>< But I'll try to update today/tomorrow.
Thank you so much for reading!!

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SPOT TT___TT princessliette July 17 2012, 00:56:24 UTC
wae you always updated your fics when i was asleep TT___TT

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Re: SPOT TT___TT princessliette July 17 2012, 01:07:54 UTC
i just want to cry TT__TT let me cry TT__TT

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Re: SPOT TT___TT hitoshisakurai July 22 2012, 08:20:57 UTC
*bc that's when my creative juices flow the most otl*

Let's cry together, ne D:

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