Ashtray Heart [EPILOGUE]

Jul 28, 2012 18:06

Title: Ashtray Heart [EPILOGUE]
Pairing: OnHo, 2Min
Rating: R
Word Count: 315
Genre: angst, smut, slice of life
Summary: Minho cheated. And now he regrets it dearly.

Previous chapters: PROLOGUE, 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13

It’s not perfect. It will never be. )

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hitoshisakurai July 29 2012, 12:49:31 UTC
Yes, exactly!!;3

I chose OnHo because I think that Taemin wouldn't be able to live with Minho, knowing how he's been lying to him all along. Taemin is also the strongest out of the three and ready to move on. While in Jinki's case, he always knew there was something that Minho was hiding from him, that something was lacking there. And even though he was equally as broken as Taemin when he learnt the truth, he couldn't let go, maybe because Minho really became the centre of his life while Tae was always more focused on his studies... and Minho loved them both, but Jinki gave him more than Taemin ever did. So. Something like that ;DD

Thank you so much for reading!!<3

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y111 July 28 2012, 16:41:36 UTC
Even though I hate the way it ended, how Taemin was hurt, etc., your writing is wonderful. But I can't shake the bittersweet feeling especially since this is posted on the Taeminho community. I don't feel like Minho suffered enough. But as I said, you write very well.

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hitoshisakurai July 29 2012, 12:16:22 UTC
Minho's still suffering somehow, not sure whether he made the right choice, I think he'll never get over it. The three of them are hurt, but I think that Taemin was the strongest one of them all... though, as a writer, I can't say I wasn't conflicted when thinking of the plot. But, it had to be solved somehow... /le sigh
Thank you for reading!!

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itsjustjodie July 28 2012, 17:01:30 UTC
TBH i knew that 2min wasnt going to get back together, but i still tried to believe, but i liked the ending, but honestly i dont understand the Epilogue so much..
but anyway im glad that Minho and Jinki are taking things slow and Jinki is trying to trust him again..
But i better not here Minho doing some shit like this again... (protecting mode) cause if he does i would personaly addd myself and take something that he wont get ever back :)

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hitoshisakurai July 29 2012, 12:18:24 UTC
I can explain if you have any questions about the epilogue^^ *that's why I shouldn't write things after coming back from the cinema from the newest Batman*
Hahaha, now Minho's way wiser, I think, it's a completely new situation, a new world, but I believe that he won't do anything stupid ever again.
Thank you so much for reading!<3

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keziayansen July 28 2012, 17:03:51 UTC
even though Jinki still have to try heal his heart for Minho...
I'M SO HAPPY CUZ ONHO AT THE LAST ^________________^
thank u thank u....
I'm happy for Taemin's wedding too....
this is awesome XD
Thank u for the story :)
waiting another OnHo story ^^
Fighting !!!

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hitoshisakurai July 29 2012, 12:19:48 UTC
Hahahahaha, I knew it xDD
I think I'll post another OnHo fic somewhere around next week, I guess ^ ^ now it'll be all about fluff, no more angst for a while ;D

Thank you for reading!!<33

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princessliette July 28 2012, 17:12:53 UTC
T_____________________________________T

choi jinri is sulli? DDD:

T_____T

great fic bb..

but..

me still mourning T___________T

but you did great job T____________T

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hitoshisakurai July 29 2012, 12:20:41 UTC
Yupp. Idk why whenever I think about Taemin with a girl, it's always Sulli. I don't even like her. *shrugs*

Ne, don't mourn bb!!! *wipes tears* <333

Thank you for reading!!<33

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