One night wouldn't be enough [1/1]

[hitoshisakurai]

Title: One night wouldn’t be enough [1/1]
Pairing: JongKey
Word Count: 4079
Rating: R
Genre: slice of life, romance
Summary: At the age of eight, Jonghyun learns that love does not exist.

Comments

[itsjustjodie]

*standing ovation*
Beautiful hunny, this was just soo beautiful...

[hitoshisakurai]

*blushes hard*
Omg, thank you so much, I'm really happy you liked it!!

[just2wings]

And this seems to be exactly what Kibum wanted, because he immediately clings to Jonghyun, his left arm under his neck, the right one circling around his waist, his chin resting on the top of Jonghyun’s head.
Kibum’s scent is everywhere, his warmth is burning Jonghyun’s skin, and his heartbeat sounds like a soft lullaby.
I really liked Kibum in this. He didn't really push Jonghyun but you could still see he cared <3 I think that's exactly what poor Jjong needed.
They kiss, and then-
And then they love.
This is beautiful written. I loved how it came off. How simple it was <3
This was sort of angsty but you know of my love for cheese <3 hehe <333 so yeah I really appreciated the ending :3

[hitoshisakurai]

I made Kibum like this because he wanted Jonghyun to realise on his own what he really needs, as if he could read it like an open book. So I'm really happy you liked him! ;3
Thank you so much for reading!! Cheese ftw! ;D <33

[xdenisex]

this is so wonderfully gorgeous i cant really put my thoughts together. even though the plot is kind of overplayed, with jonghyun being the player and all that, you made it really different.

your style of writing i just ;~~; i want to marry it

also i have so many favorite quotes its kind of ridiculous but im going to list them all anyway c:

It’s lust, he thinks. Kibum is an attractive man after all, and Jonghyun hasn’t had sex in a while. It’s natural. Lust is natural

[hitoshisakurai]

I wanted to base it on a simple, a bit schematic idea, I'm happy you think I made it seem a bit different! ^^
OMG thank you so much for pointing out all your favourite parts, it made me so happy ide ;~~~; and you actually pointed the ones that I like the most too, so. Thank you <3

Really, thank you so much for such an amazing comment, what a nice thing to wake up to! :D <3

[minimi0129]

It's my first time leaving a comment here at LJ...
and it's all because of this fic...
This is just A-W-E-S-O-M-E!

Jonghyun learned how to love because of Key...
This story is too precious~ <3

[shineeshipper08]

This was adorable at the end and so cute. I love the style and flow of this. Agh really well done :)