character hist for ssi application

[hitsutaichou_10]

Byakuya was born was a silver spoon in his mouth. His father was well known and a successful billionaire. However, his family was focused only on business, money and relations with other well known and famous businessmen. They did not believe in spending time together unless it was something important and related to work. Byakuya grew up alone.

Comments

[downtown_sassy]

You know, i like it a lot! You obviously took some time with this. (You're going for Byakuya...DUH) Remember to make an example journal entry for Byakuya, and post it on the application thread. (You're probably going to triple post! lol)

Although as a heads up, you should put spaces in the hist, it gets kinda hard to read when it all runs together like that.

[hitsutaichou_10]

Hey thanks!

Unfortunately, I stupidly submitted already. I made an example journal entry in the application.. Just posted these two here because there was no space for them in the comment so i had to link(:

Appreciate your feedback! If i get rejected i'd probably have to rewrite it so it looks easier to read..haha(: I'm going for Byakuya only.. Oops, did i do the example log wrongly? Though now i think about it, Byakuya's gonna be a little hard.. Seeing as he doesn't talk much and stuff.. Hmm but never mind, i'll try Renji then(:

Thanks(: if i get accepted, I'll spread more of your wonderful icons by asking you to make some for me(:

[downtown_sassy]

I'm sure you'll get hired. The GM has been gone for a bit, but when she gets back, I'm waiting for good news!

[hitsutaichou_10]

Haha thanks! I was getting anxious when she did not reply until now(: lol. Will let you know(: haha