Mistakes We Make - Akame - PG

[hizashikage]

Title: Mistakes We Make
Authors: anamuan
Pairing: Akame
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1,474
Summary: Maybe you never got over your first love.
A/N: maya_morning and I decided it would be a fun idea to take a bit of dialogue and each write fic to it and then exchange them to see the different places two authors took the same starting point. This is that fic. (maya_morning's is over here

Comments

[watanabe_je]

nice...

thanks for sharing this (^_^)

[anamuan]

aw, thank you <3

(also, can i say lkfealkklfa 1x2 icon!!)

[arisa_draconis]

XD

Wonderful~

[anamuan]

why, thank you!

[pithetaphish]

Here from maya_morning

It's really interesting to read the two different perspectives you both took on the same small pieces of dialogue. I liked the constant examination of Jin's headspace - a bit like you've got his brain under a microscope - and the gradual changes in his feelings towards Kame.

there wasn't really a thing you could name or end between them, but it had ended, and he had done it.
Jin rather suspected that he'd broken Kame's heart.

This is just beautiful, so understated and so much more powerful for it.

Not even if you were both silly teenagers at the time, careless with knees and hearts

I love this just cos it's so very accurate ^_~

Nicely done! ^_^

[anamuan]

aww, thank you ^_^ this was such a sweet comment. thanks for taking the time to tell me things that you liked.

[ununoriginal]

my favourite kind of akame &hearts

thanks for sharing :D

[anamuan]

thank you for reading <33

[fyad7]

nice, i really liked this. thanks for sharing!!

[anamuan]

aww, thank you for reading <3