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sbluesnow August 13 2009, 22:20:18 UTC
SPOT! i'll be back later! busy right now xD

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sbluesnow August 14 2009, 18:19:43 UTC
OHMYFINGSIWON!!!!!!!!!!

A cop cannot be in love with a gangster.
that's terrible! fricking terrible! but more drama so i love it!
but awwwwwww bummie!!!!!!!!!!!
you're going to get hurt so bad!
*huggles you*

yesung you knew yet you continued to follow him and know that you've said that, what do you expect from that? for kibum to distant himself from you? for kibum to quit? to stop being a gangster?

a cop can not fall in love with a gangster.
a gangster can not fall in love with a cop either.

kibum will be in a lot of pain that's to come but you'll be worse won't you yesung? *sighs*

kibum! don't give up. don't give up on the love because once jaejoong is in the picture, you might not have a chance anymore and then that's when the real pain of who yesung really is and what you've had since the beginning becomes questionable

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hkmcdull168 August 14 2009, 19:57:58 UTC
hahahaha poor siwon, he always seems to be abused LOL

*sigh* the angst...as much as i don't like, it makes for a good story/drama LOL. so yes...can't avoid it >_<

yes, kibum is really the only one that yesung likes/trusts in the gang, which is why they got close. but at the same time, he can't forget who he really is T_T

jaejoong's story is coming up next, so watch out for that ;)

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sbluesnow August 16 2009, 04:06:10 UTC
LOL he can take it ^^

i know me too. i don't like it but i love drama so eh
you can't win them all right? haha

yesung. you've already crossed the line. don't go deeper otherwise not only will kibum be broken but so will you

jaejoong? god wow that's a major key point. i can't wait ^^

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duosbabygirl August 13 2009, 23:55:52 UTC
Good lord! Ok who saw that ending coming? Not me that's for sure. So epic and wonderful. I love this story so much. I can't wait to read ur next update.

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hkmcdull168 August 14 2009, 03:05:30 UTC
hehehe thank you so so so much for betaing <333
i'm really glad that there weren't many mistakes ^^ because...typos are evil :)

loll as much as i loveeee yebum, that last part was needed ^^;; watching banjun dramas really affected me i guess haha

and finally, your comment makes me squeal XD thank you!!!!

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hkmcdull168 September 4 2009, 03:35:50 UTC
chapter 6 is now posted :D
hehehe...i got impatient and just posted it cuz it's been a long time since i've updated ^^ but still...thank youuuuu for betaing :)

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jingeng August 14 2009, 00:58:51 UTC
wow.. I never expected something like this to happen. But that's good, I love this.
Even though it's still kind of sad..

Now since there aren't any more chapters written I can't wait for the update =)

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hkmcdull168 August 14 2009, 03:06:51 UTC
hahaha i saw your comment on the previous chapters, and hahaha you've finished all i've written so far ^^;;

i'm

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jingeng August 14 2009, 11:55:43 UTC
Yeah I really liked this fiction ^^
I don't think actually that I've read a Yebum fic before (my OTP is Kangsung but I also really like Yewook) but I happen to like them very much as well =)
And I'm glad I made you smile =)

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hkmcdull168 August 14 2009, 20:00:10 UTC
hehe yewook was my first otp, cuz seriously, how can they get any more adorable? the minidrama totally cemented it also XD kangsung is hilarious in my opinion. cuz kangin totally abuses on (and off i'm assuming) stage, so i loveee kangsung as well XD

but...yebum is my ultimate within-suju otp XD i love catching their ninja yebum moments LOLLL. i'm very honored that this is your first yebum fic ^^ maybe...you'll start shipping them now too :D

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ms_wolbra August 14 2009, 01:13:02 UTC
Whoa whoa whoa. Yesung is actually...an undercover cop or something? Is this what I am getting from that last sentence? That made me cry so bad. Poor Kibummie~

As long as you update I'm happy! But...still my poor Kibum and Yesung. The angst hurts but it's so needed. Love your story <3

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hkmcdull168 August 14 2009, 03:11:44 UTC
omgosh! new reader? XD

hehe yep yep...yesung's an undercover cop ;) and even though i love yebum sooooo much, the angst is needed T_T

i'm actually surprised myself at this chapter. i never thought i could incorporate fail/dork!yesung and angsty-yebum in one chapter o.O

thank you sooo much for reading and commenting!! comments like yours make me reeeeeeeeally happy :D

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ms_wolbra August 16 2009, 03:25:03 UTC
I saw the yebum and i was like YESS MUST READ! and i love your whole story line, or what you gave. it's so freaking badass XP

And i feel like i just solved a case. how accomplished. and uh oh, i wonder what's going to happen when hannie and more importantly kibum find out.

you did fantasic! i love it all :D i need more yebum goodness!

and aww i'll comment anytime. you deserve it! <3

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hkmcdull168 September 4 2009, 03:36:18 UTC
chapter 6 is now posted :D

...i made a reference to you in the notes LOL

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hkmcdull168 August 14 2009, 20:01:37 UTC
hahaaha reading your spazzy reply made me squeal XD

ehh...the angst is needed, unfortunately. as much as i love yebum, this needs to happen >_<

hehe jaejoong's story will be coming up soon, so watch out for that :)

thank you so much for reading and commenting!! XD

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hkmcdull168 September 4 2009, 03:36:24 UTC
chapter 6 is now posted :D

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