Concrit Post 16

[hmd_me]

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[slains]

dark angel
• alec mcdowell

heroes
• declan mcvay

supernatural
• dean winchester
• dean winchester (au)
• franklin owens (oc)
• ed zeddmore
• zachariah
• amelia novak
• sam winchester
• lucifer
• castiel

At least one of these hasn't been played yet. Annnddddd that's about it. They're played in sixwordstories/angelsandasses and one is played over at im_mortalis

[unsharedburden]

I can't even begin to tell you how much I love the way that you portray Dean fucking Winchester. Even being new to the fandom, I know enough to see that you have a wonderful grip on his voice and his personality. He's so much fun to read, and what the fuck - you're such a BAMF - that stuff you wrote last night is like an orgasm for the eyeballs. ONLY BETTER. Ummm... That about sums that up. No crit. Cannot come up with.

Ed. Perfect. Again. Maybe I suck your dick too hard? But um. No crit. Cannot come up with.

Lucifer's fucking rock. No crit. Sucking dick now. Perfect, oh my god, I love him.

Michael!Dean. Only not really Dean. So... dean!Michael? WHATEVER IT IS. I fucking... I cannot... Reading Michael is a delight for me. I love him, I love that the interaction I've had with him has been negative. Because really, as misunderstood as he is, he's kind of a dick - and it's really nice to stick to the 'you're a dick. *is a bitch herself about this shit but whatever*' and ':|' than 'you're a dick but let's be friends anyway' even if I

[pacifistninja]

I love your Zach, and Alec's fun,

We've yet to play with some of the others..

You know we has to fix that man!

[defeatedlucifer]

Do I even need to say it. You are the Dean to my Sam! AND YOU ROCK! So very glad you came along and joined. Enabling me into an awesome plot!

But seriously; you're portrayal of Dean is magnificent. I absolutely adore him. He makes me want to pinch his cheeks and slap some sense into him all at once. The very way I feel when watching the show.

All I can say is bb you rock!

[unsharedburden]

... I'm not the only one who sucks at crit, THANKS NOW.

/threadjacking to give Sam a hard time.

[autophoenix]

You're actually one of the few Deans on SWS that I really enjoy threading with and reading. I have impossible standards for them, so there are only a handful that I ~approve of.~ I try to avoid excessive dick-sucking in my HMD comments, so instead of giving you a general "I like you" I'm going to be ~specific~ -- or try, anyway.

You do really well with internal monologue type stuff for Dean because I'm a stalky stalky stalker and read your logs, even though I've never had one with you. It really impresses me how you get in his head sometimes. Also, you're one of my favorite demon Deans (second only to artistwithknife) because you retain his inherent Dean characteristics while giving him this dysfunctional attribute that demons have and their morals system.

I've seen your Zachariah around too, and I wish you'd bring him out more because I really enjoy him. :3 And, I haven't seen your Sam around, but I'd like tooooo.

/IS ~LEADHISARMY/THATDEMONBITCH BUT TOO LAZY TO LOG OUT.