Concrit Post 17

[hmd_me]

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[electrocutesy]

@ sixwordstories|thebennetcrew|EVERYWHERE
Heroes | Elle Bishop | electrocutesy
Chuck | Sarah Walker | froyoho

I'll just mostly reiterate what autophoenix said: PLEASE I WANT REAL CRIT. If you really, really want to tell me all about what I do right and nothing about the wrong, I guess I can't stop you and I certainly will jizz over it. But I've been wanting to improve especially Elle lately because I feel like I've hit a slump so... gimme what you got.

[specialmonster]

Critting you is...hard, always for me, especially when I'm still jizzing to myself about the Casey/Elle log which was one of the best things in my life. The only real crit I can think is I think you're letting this recent round of self doubt get to you too much, and that effects your charaterization more than anything else. Self fufilling prophecy sort of thing, if you tell your self you're bad at something enough...you'll end up bad. But I feel like with the past couple of threads we've done in our PSL and with Casey you've gotten back on track with her, so maybe re-watching the scenes and stuff was just what you need.

I also want to complain about...I'm sad we don't get more Casey and Sarah interactions, but we've discussed before how with their working relationship being different in BNW it's not like they would just...sit around and chat. They aren't small talk people. So it makes sense, but makes me sad.

[electrocutesy]

The only real crit I can think is I think you're letting this recent round of self doubt get to you too much, and that effects your characterization more than anything else.

It's... so true lol. Because I know that she really sucked the first half of the month but I just... wasn't on the same page as her anymore. Watching scenes really did help and like... telling myself to stop being a baby and thinking about dropping helped, too. I think the fact that I got psyched out and stopped playing her really fucked me up this month. And really besides thanking me for kicking my ass out of being a sad little bitch, I really need to thank you for toughing it out with me and being supportive through my bout of too many feelings and such.

I feel like I have her now and I'm starting to have fun again so this is all good news, really. I'm sorry you had to suffer through my Elle having an identity crisis anyway lmao. You're amazing. ♥

I am too. :( I'm overall sad about the lack of Chuck characters interacting, but obviously there are bigger

[blueshocks]

I'm on Elle's account now and too lazy to switch. So you get that.

I'm always glad to help and listen and we all have too many emotions sometimes. You had to deal with me this morning, enough said. But I love you and I'm glad to help and I'm glad it's being fun for you again because I think I would die without your Elle in my life. I've become too dependent on her to live without her. /sounds creepy forever.

Clearly, we need to talk to Brandi about Chuck trying arrange a dinner for everyone or something, because you know he would.

[electrocutesy]

*gets it*

LMAO you know you have permission to be creepy forever. I love you too and I know I'm being... super difficult lately and I really... can't thank you enough for understanding even though I know I would get annoyed if I were you. I'm... not as nice of a person as you; it's just the truth.

LMAOOOO OMG HE WOULD.

[survived3wars]

I'm just..too dependent on you in my life to let go now..so being creepingly supportive is how I roll now.

He wooooould.

[electrocutesy]

I knew you were just being nice to monopolize my life. ISN'T THAT TRUE, KATIE?

[blueshocks]

It is, but I admitted to that a long time ago.

[electrocutesy]

Crafty bitch.

[autophoenix]

I CAN'T GIVE YOU REAL CRIT BUT I'LL KEEP MY DICK-SUCKING TO A MINIMUM?

When I think of Elle, I think of yours. ♥ I am stalking the Casey/Elle log and I can seriously ... imagine all of it being stuff of Elle from canon and it's incredible. I love her relationship with Molly especially, and the nicknames she comes up with people so flippantly. It's gorgeous. There, maybe my specific dick sucking will count as crit. ;_;

GOD I USED TO BE SO INTIMIDATED BY YOU AND EVEN NOW THAT I KNOW WE BOTH JUST JIZZ OVER EACH OTHER ALL THE TIME, I STILL WORSHIP YOU IMMENSELY.

[electrocutesy]

TIFAAAAA. This made me sob with gratefulness LMAO I'm a dork. As in I just... heaved and whimpered a little. That makes me so happy because Katie and I just jumped into that log and I did so thinking that it would suck because... I felt sucky, but it ended up being awesome. I want more Molly in Elle's life but I know Candace is kinda busy. AND THOSE NICKNAMES CAN BE HARD, OKAY. I'm not as witty as Elle.

I'M SO THANKFUL FOR THIS SPECIFIC DICK-SUCKING COMMENT. It was a nice thing to wake up to. ♥ I'm glad that we intimidate and love each other so much because you... really intimidate me sometimes, I can't even lie. JIZZJIZZJIZZJIZZJIZZ.

[regeneracy]

I can't really think of actual hardcore crit to give you for your girls, because I think they're amazing. They're both very well rounded and you actually get to their thought processes and the emotions beneath the rough exterior, and I just admire how you can do that so well. Elle is always a joy to play against, and I love watching her develop into a mostly normal functioning member of society. I feel so bad for not having chuck out for Sarah to develop more, and I have been trying to tag around with him more to everyone, not just the Chuck cast, but it's still really difficult for me to write for him all the time. I'm glad that my sorry ass doesn't hold you or Sarah back, though, and you keep having her be awesome despite my fail. She's so kickass but she still has her soft side that makes me go 'awwww' every time I see it

[electrocutesy]

Elle is always a joy to play against, and I love watching her develop into a mostly normal functioning member of society.I'm... really glad that came across because I think it's happened in a way that I didn't really plan and that Elle still really doesn't understand, but it happened just through all of her interactions and where she was when she was integrated into BNW. I'm always afraid I'm not doing it right, rofl, making Elle less like an anti-social person with the emotional maturity of a pouty teenager

[intuitivelyapt]

I wish I could give you the real crit you crave, but... I can't. ;_; I love you and your Elle so much Crystal she is just... perfection to me. You capture all the sides of her so well, her sassy bitchiness and her vulnerability. And I love your Sarah. I don't think I've jizzed to her to you as much as I do Elle but now... is the time.

I was trying really hard to think of something crit like to say but I can't. This isn't even a handsie. It's like dry humping.

[electrocutesy]

Aw. :') Thank you so much. I feel thoroughly dry humped and loved. :3 I'm glad everyone thinks she has range because I think that is just... one of the keys to playing Elle and just anyone right. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥