Concrit Post 17

[hmd_me]

How's My Driving?
∞ Comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ Reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism.
∞ Learn from the suggestions and profit!

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[aztec]

☈ elegycity
    • royalejing | King of Bandits Jing
    • azarathsavior | Teen Titans
    • pinkgenocide | Code Geass
    • patients_lie | House MD
    • hisothereight | Ironman: The Movie

I'm really hoping for feedback on Pepper especially, as she's my newest muse and I'm still feeling out her IC voice.

☈ polychromatic
    • is_paranoid | Storm Hawks

anon-enabled concrit post | full muse list

[perfectzz]

AHHH HOUSE ♥ AND PEPPER ♥

I ninja-ed around in elegycity reading some posts, and i think your Pepper is pretty spot on...though, idk whether my opinion is based on my ignorance of rp. i really enjoyed reading them though asdjfk;

[aztec]

Ah, thanks! ♥ She's going through a really rough patch IC right now, so I've been trying to balance her reactions to the setting with canon.