Concrit Post 17

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[cptn_j_kirk]

cptn_j_kirk Screened concrit post for her here.

owns_the_chair

Suggestions? Concrit? Here's your chance to tell me what you think.

Long reply is looooong. Sorry 'bout that. XD

[cptn_j_kirk]

Not as much time as I spend wondering about them, I'm sure

XD

[cptn_j_kirk]

Trust me, I could ramble on about these two 'till your ears fell off. XD

And yes, some ships are easier to play, and I never play a pairing where there's no chemistry between the characters. It's odd, because when I first started playing the girl, she had no preference for pairings. Now, she pounces when she sees a well-played Bones. So yes, there might be an X-factor hiding in there somewhere. I do try to keep her in line though, hard as it can be on occasion. ;P

And Jim/Uhura make total sense in their verse. Not a pairing I'd have thought of either, but it works for them, it seems. And he's actually not as unwilling to commit to her as it may seem. He's just scared to tell her he maybe kinda wants that.

[kirkstarted]

How very interesting, I didn't know you played owns_the_chair. Never played with them. I was wondering if you played a guy Kirk.

However, I've played with your girl Kirk, (think I was one of the first people to do so), and I think you've grown into her as time progressed. I like that she's able to take authority, and her ability to command certain situations. My critique is there's a lot of topics where she's depressed, and I don't know, maybe that's verse specific, but it doesn't seem like a Kirk trait, especially to expose her emotions like that.

I do think what she says is extremely Kirk like, like the actual voice is accurate.

+ It might give away my super secret identity, but I also love the fact you're willing to do long, substantial tags. It's much easier to build off of a partner who gives back as much as they get and more than someone who gives you back a sentence.

[cptn_j_kirk]

Yep, that's me. Guilty as charged. ;P And I don't think very many people knew I played him too

[kirkstarted]

Nope, can't say I have any idea.

Heh, I could link you to a few of those. Ah, you weren't bad, though your favorite ship has definitely stayed the same. I don't blame you, I'm a rapid K/B shipper as well.

I see, and it's not really a bad thing. I think that Kirk can be depressed, he/she just needs to not express it too openly to whoever comes by. More of a show, don't tell. But I'm really glad you're up for taking a critique and not throwing it back in my face, it's more common to see the latter.

Love it, I love it. You should join a game, you know, maybe with the guy Kirk, because I think it would help you blossom further if you had somewhere more than a sandbox.

Maybe you do, maybe ya don't. I play each one of the main three, and multiple versions of one of them.

[cptn_j_kirk]

I kept it a bit secret for a while, wanting people to judge the muse on what he was, not the mun behind him. ;) So am not surprised no one knew

[kirkstarted]

I entirely don't blame you. I'm the same exact way, and it wasn't obvious.

Don't blame you there either. My other boy won't do any other pairing if his life depended on it. K/B is the best pairing anyways.

Yeah, but not every sees it that way. Some people put it up expecting asspats and go batshit when they don't get them. LOL. But I understand the plot thing too, because often the roleplay will stagnate without something to push it along. I look forward to seeing you take the advice.

OH DUH right you're in ERPG. No, not typically, not really serious ones. It falls just between canon and OC, so somewhere in fanon and people don't usually want it in their games. I wish you luck, however.

God I hope I'm not Hemingway. The man wouldn't know what a full stop was if it bit him on his dead ass.

[cptn_j_kirk]

Yes. The very best pairing!

And people who don't want actual concrit, but only someone's lips on their ass shouldn't do concrit posts. There are other memes for that. However, people shouldn't use concrit posts for wank and flaming either, and that happens far too often too, so... *heavy sigh* I guess it's just another example of to each their own. ;)

Yep. I am. Or, well. The boy is. ;P Blech, maybe I should just start my own game so the girl has somewhere to play out actual plots and story arcs.

LOL, no, he wouldn't. Hrmmmm... GDI, where are my x-ray goggles when I need them?! ;) *is stumped and very curious*