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Concrit Post 17

Jun 19, 2010 07:03

How's My Driving?
∞ Comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ Reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism.
∞ Learn from the suggestions and profit!

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blueshocks June 19 2010, 00:06:56 UTC

sixwordstories
Elle Bishopblueshocks/tookthemaway
Bela Talbot insilksheets
Gretchen Burg jumppushfall
Sandra Bennet mrmugglesbitch
John Casey survived3wars
Captain Hammer lovingmetodeath
Sylar specialmonster
Gabriel Gray justgabriel
Barbara Gordon formerlybatgirl
Jessica Hamby virginvampire

I love jizzing as much as everyone but if anyone had any actually constructive crit, I'd love that too.

regeneracy June 19 2010, 09:58:43 UTC

Also, this is such a short comment but I'm exhausted and I'll comment with things that make sense tomorrow.

blueshocks June 19 2010, 10:02:15 UTC

I've been kind of down and out of it lately, which has made it a little harder to keep up with Elle as much as I used to. I'm trying to work on it though, I miss being as involved as I used to be.

As for Sandra...I keep trying to get her out more, but I feel so shaky on her voice that it makes me very hesitant to do so, sometimes.

regeneracy June 19 2010, 10:12:12 UTC

Yeah, I know that the rl stuff impacts our rp stuff, and I'm going through it too. ;___; But I know that once rl stops kicking us in the ass, it'll get better and we can do awesome things again.

I have no business asking for a character more since I...know I need to bring out Chuck more. I know I write for him decently and I should have confidence in him by now, his voice just comes so hard for me, I have to be in a very particular state of mind in order to write for him. SO I AM SORRY TO YOU AND CRYSTAL ;____; You deserve a more active Chuck.

blueshocks June 19 2010, 10:21:43 UTC

I think we've...all been going through it. It happens, sadly. But we'll bounce back and be awesome again.

I love your Chuck though. So, so there! But yeah, I feel you. I feel like I have to be in the certain mindsets for certain muses.

regeneracy June 19 2010, 10:23:59 UTC

The sad truth is I have to be freakishly hyper to write for him. Like the last time I did a post for him I drank three Dr.Peppers and had 4 oreos before digging in to write. So I guess Chuck is just a hyper girl or something, idk.

blueshocks June 19 2010, 10:25:06 UTC

Well clearly we need to just feed you more oreos and Dr. Peppers.

ihadmittenson June 19 2010, 16:55:05 UTC

I know it's just rl shit getting in the way right now, and I feel horrible about bringing this up, but sometimes I feel like your tags are ... a little hard to reply to, I guess. I know that characters don't always have a long tangent to go into, but ... idk ( ... )

blueshocks June 19 2010, 19:03:15 UTC

No...I know my tags have been hard to work with lately, and I really apologize for that. I know how hard that can be to work with, and you guys deserve better than that.

Thank you, I've always been firm about not making people get over shit right away in RP, and between that and get possessed, Elle through a lot almost all at once, and it really effected her and I've been really careful to play her getting over it slowly, so I'm glad..someone enjoys it, I guess.

I'm glad, Sandra's voice is definitely one that's hard for me, and I worry about it a lot, honestly. I'm always afraid you comes out a little flat sounding.

ihadmittenson June 20 2010, 02:13:25 UTC

I'm glad you at least know. And I wish I could make rl better for you, because you don't deserve to deal with stress and shit. :C

I really do enjoy it.

Well, I think the more you play her and the more CR you get with her, the more you'll feel comfortable/she'll feel less flat to you.

blueshocks June 20 2010, 02:40:41 UTC

Thank you. Maybe I just need to take a break from tagging or something. I don't want to just give people bad tags.

Hopefully as I play her more you'll be right, and I'll find a way to flesh her out more.

likepeaches June 20 2010, 04:18:04 UTC

Might not be a bad idea. Sometimes we all just need a break. &hearts

That's how it usually goes with characters for me. Hopefully you'll be able to get some more threading time in with Noah when Lexie's life chills out a bit.

bitch_isback June 20 2010, 02:25:30 UTC

Jenny and Tifa have already said the same thing and I don't want to... cram it even further down your throat and make you feel bad, but I feel the same way about your tags sometimes and have trouble replying to them for that reason. ;_; But I have trouble replying to tags that should be... moronically simple to reply to, so it's not just you at least in my threads.

But I love your Elle as always, and your Captain Hammer is seriously just... one of the best things in my life. And I love your Casey and your Sandra and your Gretchen and there is just... a lot of love here, okay.

blueshocks June 20 2010, 02:39:13 UTC

Yeah, I know it's been a really problem lately and I'm sorry. I don't meant to just leave you all with crap. It's been harder for me, tagging lately, and maybe I just shouldn't do it if I'm going to be just doing this to everyone. It's not fair to people.

Thank you. Love is always appreciated.

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