Concrit Post 18

[hmd_me]

How's My Driving?
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∞ Reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism.
∞ Learn from the suggestions and profit!

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[singing_monk]

☀ soul_campaign

☆ Cuba | Axis Powers Hetalia | littlestcommie
☆ George Washington | John Adams | firstinall
☆ Adrian Monk | Monk | cursedwithagift

☀ discedo

☆ Ukraine | Axis Powers Hetalia | dewinthesun

☀ betrayedbyrpg

☆ Belarus | Axis Powers Hetalia | incestuals

☀ dear_mun

☆ Cameroon | Axis Powers Hetalia | riverofprawns (apped at mayfield_rpg)
☆ Sealand | Axis Powers Hetalia | micronational
☆ Babe | Babe | thatll_do
☆ Billy | Hocus Pocus | withadullneedle

[nerdable]

OMG WHY HAVEN'T I PLAYED WITH YOU MORE? I really hope we get to play more and I will totally look around for your posts! Plus, you joined mayfield so I will totally be attacking Cameroon if you get in *A*

I KNOW IT'S NOT CRIT BUT LETS PLAY TOGETHER MORE!!

[singing_monk]

PROBABLY BECAUSE I HAVE BEEN A LOSER WITH ACTIVITY LATELY. Yes, and I will do the same because hrejkt moar playing do want.

WHAT THIS IS TOTALLY CRIT WHAT ARE YOU SAYING.

same person

[failboatboss]

....oh god Ukraine o////o

TOTALLY.

who is this get out you impostor

[singing_monk]

Haha yes that usually is the response. Poor bb. xD

[usernameism]

sisterrrrrrr

huffhuff i need to tag sister more don't I

[singing_monk]

Brotherrrrrrr

You always need to tag sister more. Always.

[betterredthan]

s-sisterrrrrrrr

...only if sister doesn't come within a five feet radius anymore.

[incestuals]

Brotherrrrrrrr

That's fine. Sister will be sure to remain in two foot radius to make Brother comfortable.

[betterredthan]

s-sister!!!

No.... That's not how it works. ;A;

[incestuals]

BROOOOOOTHERRRRRRR

What do you mean of course that's how it works.

[betterredthan]

....sister.

no because you're doing the opposite of how it works

[incestuals]

Can it be marriage time now.

Actually I think you've got it all mixed up. This is definitely how it's done.

[betterredthan]

Nope not yet.

No I'm pretty sure it means you go farther away. ;A;

[incestuals]

What do you mean we're in the throes of passion here let's go for it.

Hahahahaha where do you get these silly ideas.

[betterredthan]

What passion