Concrit Post 19

[hmd_me]

How's My Driving?
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absolute_hold
Giovanni || Dogs: Bullets & Carnage || pseudism.
Hazama/Terumi || Blazblue || extratemporal.
Dai || Plot NPC || redeify.

soul_campaign
Giovanni || Dogs: Bullets & Carnage || nebensonne.

Miscellaneous
Kubota Makoto || Wild Adapter || wordsoul.
Wong || Psychic Force || futurition.
Sano Yasuyoshi || Air Gear || imploretime.

[loisneach]

/reaches over

/touches

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/excitement.

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ksdj Honestly, thank you so much! 8( It's hugely flattering to me if he seems at all interesting or worth following, especially coming from someone unfamiliar with the canon. I'm really so glad I decided to app there, too; everyone's been really welcoming and awesome.

I'm sort of in the same boat with knowing nothing about Code Geass, but your Euphemia is absolutely precious and I love reading her logs with everyone. Anddd man I don't even think I could be constructive about Ed without being reduced to bubbling praise, because you always seem to do so right with him and getting that strong soldier side of his personality down along with his inquisitive, social side. I've been meaning to follow him more closely too, but I was tracking his recent log (mutual stalking!) with Rise and it was a really awesome thread on both your parts.

[bullet_dance]

I know I'm not in any of your games, but I've sort of been watching the cast. 8D;;; And I must say--I really think you and everyone else in there is awesome. I'm so not good at explaining these sort of things, but basically, everyone and their reactions to situations and whatnot is believable (or IC--YEAH LET'S GO WITH THAT), and all of your threads are always a great read. All the threadjacking makes it even more amusing because...yeah. AND THE LATEST PLOT INTRIGUES ME. :D JUST, UH. KEEP UP THE AMAZING JOB, YOU GUYS.

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dsopgj Oh my god. Seriously, thank you so much for the really wonderful compliments! My cast is gonna be so thrilled to hear about this. o/

And I'm really, really glad if we all sound right. I love my cast very much and I feel very lucky to be able to play with them, and it's always really nice to hear it from someone else too. And we're all crit-receptive people, so if at any time you feel like Terumi needs better steering, please do drop me a line. ♥ And fksjd the threadjacking. AT does that a lot and Blazblue's characters seem to lend themselves to it really well, CAN'T STOP COCKBLOCKING EACH OTHER...

Also our Ragna's seen more of Luceticast than I have, but we both agree that you have a great cast going on over there! Your Noel is adorable, and Jin and Bang are really hilarious, but everyone in general is doing a really great job. You keep it up too, okay!

[bullet_dance]

You're welcome. <3 I'll drop a line if you'd really like me to, though, but right now he's on the right path. :Db Very much so. And rofl, that kind of makes me wish my game had that more just because it looks so fun. And the cockblocking. B| IT'S CANON, SO IT JUST MAKES SENSE.

And ffffff, thank you so much. ;~; I'll be sure to relay the message over to my cast as well.

[usagggiiii]

Aw, thank you! Our game's a little slow right now, but I'm just glad our cast is dedicated enough to stick around, and even have a viewer or two from the outside. I know we get wrapped up in playing our characters so we might not be able to see what we're doing wrong, so outside opinions are always welcomed! If you ever see anything wrong with Rachel, or anyone else for that matter (we really do look for crit anywhere), feel free to drop a line. ♥

[bullet_dance]

No problem. <3 Like I told Hazama!mun, all of you really are on the right path with it, so there's no need to worry. It's just really awesome to see a cast like this.

[usagggiiii]

i hope you know

you're an asshole. :(

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Only to poofy-haired bitches. :(

[usagggiiii]

... oh you're one to talk about hair. :|a

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Don't try to front, now! There're teenage boys buying hairgel by the bucket who'd kill for this ability.

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sdofjg Rosh! ;; Thank you! I didn't realise that'd been part of your incentive to get into Dogs; I'm really very flattered!

And oh man, commmme to Blazblue. It's brilliant and ridiculous and it's a fighting game with an actual plot! -- Well, more like a visual novel with a couple of fights in it if you play story mode, really. It's rollicking good fun!

And you already know how much I love your characters bb, and the beautiful times we've had in games over the years. I do really miss playing with you, but I'm stalking you always! :(