Concrit Post 19

[hmd_me]

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[inbreds]

@sirenspull

deflames ◆ Katekyo Hitman REBORN!
crawdads ◆ Left 4 Dead 2
slewfoots ◆ Ace Attorney
haruspexes ◆ Ōkami

@mayfield_rpg

sparatoria ◆ Katekyo Hitman REBORN!

[inbreds]

I only know him from shamelessly stalking SP, but I always enjoy reading your Tsuna's stuff. He's derpy while still being serious when the situation calls for it! And I think that's a point a lot of people miss.

[inbreds]

ksdjhdl ahhh /////// thank you very much, anon! * v * i'm very glad, knowing you're enjoying it!♥

[brbstomachache]

I love Tsuna a lot.

/nothing of value to say

Okay no let me try for serious. I've played with a lot of Tsunas in the past, and yours avoids all the problems I've seen in those. He's not completely serious and competent all the time, and he still gets scared and freaked out, but at the same time he's not just a kid in over his head. He's still hapless Tsuna who's worried and confused, but he...how can I put this? He's not child-like or played like a scared kid who just suddenly switches to badass mode, which I've seen a lot. He's both without doing a 180 from one to the other.

Don't think I got that quite the way I wanted to...

[inbreds]

ah man-! i'm so happy you do glass, thank you so much! even if it didn't come out the way you wanted to say, i understand what you're saying though and i really reallyreallyreally appreciate the compliment, especially when it's coming from a canon mate. it means i'm doing things as close to right as possible, which is what i'm always aiming for, and making the game even funner for you guys ; w ;

again, thank you!

[inbreds]

No problems with Reborn as a character; in fact, I was looking forward to interacting with him. But when I responded to a big post he did awhile back, my character got no response.

Ever.

Not even from the other Reborn castmates who were hitting up other characters in the thread.

Honestly, I've kind of been leery of your cast ever since, especially since the rest of them (you've been gone, obviously) seem to largely only interact amongst themselves or with the Empress. It might be an over-generalization, because I admit I don't specifically follow the cast, but almost every post I've seen them make has been cast- or Empress-centric. That's not your fault, whether it's a legitimate complaint or not, though you can perhaps bring it up to them as a castmate?

[deflames]

Ah, that was the pool log, right? Or. Maybe another post but asdhdk right after that I did get unexpectedly busy with school, which was why I had to stop everything and leave!

But I get what you're trying to say anon, and I'll definitely bring it up with them. I kind of agree with it to an extent. I've been trying my best to branch out of the cast ever since getting off of hiatus. ; o ; thank you for bringing it up either way, though- we don't want any cast cliques do we 8I!!

[inbreds]

Yeah, sometimes RL happens. Obviously I didn't know what was up, but so long as it was just an unfortunate one-time thing, it shouldn't be a problem and I don't mind the idea of tagging Reborn again in hopes of getting better results.

Yep; cliques go home. 8I Especially not in a massive game like Mayfield. Or an awesome cast like the Reborn crew, because they all seem pretty awesome and it needs to be spread around.