Concrit Post 20

[hmd_me]

Getting things started a little early today! Enjoy.

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[poshmouthytart]

PLAY.

WITH ME.

MOAR.

>B|

[feltalone]

I want to start off by saying that you are an amazing writer. A lot of your characters I'm either not aware or very limited as far as canon goes, or I just haven't seen enough of the muse themselves to make a judgment, but the ones I know and have seen are amazing. As I FINALLY watch Heroes, Claire is just as I'd imagine her from playing with you, and Peter as well. I keep reminding myself I need to stalk Katherine and Anna more, because I know you're probably mind-blowing and I'm missing it. ;_; And of course, you've got one of the few Rubys out there I actually enjoy enough to voice it.

Like I said on plurk, the little bit of crit I do have is really nitpicky. I notice when you talk about Ruby, there is a lot of qualifying between Katie's Ruby and Gen's Ruby. I know that you know it's the same character, and you do an excellent job of playing it that way, I just think maybe the separation in your mind might be preventing you from being even better

[autophoenix]

Aww I appreciate your love for Peter/Claire/etc. a lot. I'm glad you're finally into Heroes so you can give me your thoughts on them as you progress through, it makes me smile

[feltalone]

I think that's why I was afraid to mention it, because I know you and your views and I was like...it's probably nothing. It was mostly the comment you made on my love thread that made me :| for like two seconds before I told myself, "This is Tifa, she's cool about that, stop it!" It's really good to know that I'm just paranoid, as weird as that sounds.